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قصة بنهاية مفاجئة

A story with a surprise ending

اكتب قصة قصيرة تتصاعد حتى نهاية غير متوقعة، مستخدمًا أزمنة الماضي وأدوات الربط واللغة الوصفية.

القصص القصيرة مهمة كتابية شائعة في الامتحانات وطريقة جيدة لممارسة أزمنة الماضي. القصة ذات النهاية المفاجئة تجعل القارئ يتوقع شيئًا ثم تُظهر في النهاية شيئًا مختلفًا. مهّد للمشهد في الفقرة الأولى، وطوّر الأحداث في الوسط، واحتفظ بالمفاجأة للجمل الأخيرة. المزج بين أزمنة الماضي وبعض الكلمات الوصفية يجعل القصة أكثر حيوية.

نص نموذجي

The note under the door

It was a cold, windy evening in November, and Kofi was reading on the sofa when he heard a quiet noise at the front door. Someone had pushed a small white envelope under it.

Inside there was a note in neat handwriting: 'I know what you did last Tuesday. Meet me at the bus stop at eight.' Kofi's heart was beating fast. What had he done last Tuesday? He had been to work, he had cooked dinner and he had gone for a walk in the park. Nothing strange at all.

At eight o'clock, he walked nervously to the bus stop. An old woman was standing there, holding a large cake. 'You're the young man who rescued my cat from a tree in the park last Tuesday,' she said with a smile. 'This cake is to say thank you.'

عبارات مفيدة

الزمنالاستخداممثال
Past simplethe main events, one after anotherHe opened the door and looked outside.
Past continuousbackground, or an action in progressIt was raining and the wind was blowing.
Past perfectan action before another past actionSomeone had left a parcel on the step.
  • Suddenly, the lights went out.
  • At first, nothing happened. Then the door slowly opened.
  • She held her breath and opened the box.
  • To his surprise, the room was full of people.
  • It was only then that she realised the truth.

التمرين 1 من 2

أزمنة الماضي ولغة القصة

اختر الصيغة أو العبارة الأنسب.

  1. I _____ along the beach when I saw something shiny in the sand.

  2. When we arrived at the station, the train _____.

  3. She opened the box, _____ inside and screamed with joy.

  4. While Aiko _____ dinner, someone knocked on the door.

  5. _____, the lights went out and the room became completely dark.

  6. He was sure he _____ the key in his pocket, but it wasn't there.

  7. To _____ surprise, the shop was completely empty.

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التمرين 2 من 2

أكمل القصة

اكتب الصيغة الصحيحة للفعل بين القوسين: الماضي البسيط أو الماضي المستمر أو الماضي التام.

  1. It (snow) heavily when Lena left the house.

  2. When she got to the bus stop, the last bus (already / leave).

  3. She (decide) to walk home through the park.

  4. While she (cross) the bridge, she heard a strange sound.

  5. A small dog (sit) under a tree, shaking with cold.

  6. She (pick) it up and carried it home.

  7. The next morning, she discovered that the dog (run) away from a farm two days earlier.

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دورك

مهمة كتابة

اكتب قصة قصيرة لمسابقة مجلة المدرسة. يجب أن تبدأ قصتك بهذه الجملة: 'When Sofia opened the door, she couldn't believe her eyes.' احرص على أن تكون النهاية مفاجأة للقارئ.

0 كلمة

يجري الفحص على جهازك باستخدام Harper، وهي أداة تدقيق مفتوحة المصدر، لذلك لا يُرسل نصك إلى أي مكان. تكتشف كثيرًا من الأخطاء الشائعة، لكن ليس كلها، ولا تحكم على أفكارك. ترخيص Harper

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الإجابة النموذجية

When Sofia opened the door, she couldn't believe her eyes. Her small flat, which she had left tidy that morning, was full of boxes, balloons and paper chains.

At first she thought she was in the wrong flat. She checked the number on the door twice. Then she heard a strange noise coming from the kitchen. Someone was moving around and whispering. Her heart was pounding as she walked slowly towards the sound.

Suddenly, the kitchen door flew open and her younger brother jumped out. 'Surprise!' he shouted. Sofia laughed with relief and hugged him. 'It isn't my birthday until next month!' she said.

Her brother's face went red. He had read the date on the calendar wrong, and the party guests were arriving in ten minutes.

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