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قصة بنهاية مفاجئة

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اكتب قصة قصيرة تتصاعد حتى نهاية غير متوقعة، مستخدمًا أزمنة الماضي وأدوات الربط واللغة الوصفية.

The note under the door

It was a cold, windy evening in November, and Kofi was reading on the sofa when he heard a quiet noise at the front door. Someone had pushed a small white envelope under it.

Inside there was a note in neat handwriting: 'I know what you did last Tuesday. Meet me at the bus stop at eight.' Kofi's heart was beating fast. What had he done last Tuesday? He had been to work, he had cooked dinner and he had gone for a walk in the park. Nothing strange at all.

At eight o'clock, he walked nervously to the bus stop. An old woman was standing there, holding a large cake. 'You're the young man who rescued my cat from a tree in the park last Tuesday,' she said with a smile. 'This cake is to say thank you.'

أزمنة الماضي ولغة القصة

اختر الصيغة أو العبارة الأنسب.

  1. I ___ along the beach when I saw something shiny in the sand.
    • a) walked
    • b) was walking
    • c) had walked
  2. When we arrived at the station, the train ___.
    • a) had already left
    • b) has already left
    • c) already leaves
  3. She opened the box, ___ inside and screamed with joy.
    • a) was looking
    • b) had looked
    • c) looked
  4. While Aiko ___ dinner, someone knocked on the door.
    • a) was cooking
    • b) cooks
    • c) has cooked
  5. ___, the lights went out and the room became completely dark.
    • a) Although
    • b) Suddenly
    • c) Firstly
  6. He was sure he ___ the key in his pocket, but it wasn't there.
    • a) had put
    • b) has put
    • c) puts
  7. To ___ surprise, the shop was completely empty.
    • a) me
    • b) my
    • c) mine

أكمل القصة

اكتب الصيغة الصحيحة للفعل بين القوسين: الماضي البسيط أو الماضي المستمر أو الماضي التام.

  1. It ___ (snow) heavily when Lena left the house.
  2. When she got to the bus stop, the last bus ___ (already / leave).
  3. She ___ (decide) to walk home through the park.
  4. While she ___ (cross) the bridge, she heard a strange sound.
  5. A small dog ___ (sit) under a tree, shaking with cold.
  6. She ___ (pick) it up and carried it home.
  7. The next morning, she discovered that the dog ___ (run) away from a farm two days earlier.

مهمة كتابة

اكتب قصة قصيرة لمسابقة مجلة المدرسة. يجب أن تبدأ قصتك بهذه الجملة: 'When Sofia opened the door, she couldn't believe her eyes.' احرص على أن تكون النهاية مفاجأة للقارئ.

120–180 كلمة

راجع كتابتك

  • تبدأ قصتي بالجملة المعطاة.
  • وضّحتُ أين تجري القصة ومن فيها.
  • استخدمتُ الماضي البسيط والماضي المستمر والماضي التام.
  • استخدمتُ كلمات مثل suddenly وat first وto her surprise لبناء التشويق.
  • احتفظتُ بالمفاجأة حتى النهاية.
  • استخدمتُ الفقرات لفصل مراحل القصة.

مفتاح الإجابات

أزمنة الماضي ولغة القصة

  1. b) was walkingنستخدم الماضي المستمر لفعل كان مستمرًّا عندما حدث شيء آخر.
  2. a) had already leftغادر القطار قبل وصولنا، لذا نستخدم الماضي التام: had already left.
  3. c) lookedهذه أحداث رئيسية متتابعة، لذا نستخدم الماضي البسيط: opened, looked, screamed.
  4. a) was cookingWhile + الماضي المستمر تُظهر الفعل الأطول في الخلفية الذي قوطع.
  5. b) SuddenlySuddenly تدل على أن شيئًا حدث بسرعة وبشكل غير متوقع. وهي تبني التشويق.
  6. a) had putوضع المفتاح هناك قبل هذه اللحظة في القصة، لذا نستخدم الماضي التام: had put.
  7. b) myالعبارة الثابتة هي to my surprise (أو to her أو his أو our surprise).

أكمل القصة

  1. was snowingكان الثلج يتساقط بالفعل في الخلفية، لذا نستخدم الماضي المستمر.
  2. had already left / 'd already left / had left alreadyغادرت الحافلة قبل أن تصل هي، لذا نستخدم الماضي التام: had already left.
  3. decidedهذا هو الحدث الرئيسي التالي في القصة، لذا نستخدم الماضي البسيط.
  4. was crossingWhile + الماضي المستمر تصف فعلًا كان مستمرًّا عندما حدث شيء آخر.
  5. was sitting / satالماضي المستمر يصف المشهد الذي رأته. ويمكن هنا أيضًا استخدام الماضي البسيط sat.
  6. pickedهذا حدث رئيسي في سلسلة أحداث، لذا نستخدم الماضي البسيط: picked ... carried.
  7. had run / 'd runهرب الكلب قبل أن تكتشف ذلك، لذا نستخدم الماضي التام: had run.

إجابة نموذجية

When Sofia opened the door, she couldn't believe her eyes. Her small flat, which she had left tidy that morning, was full of boxes, balloons and paper chains.

At first she thought she was in the wrong flat. She checked the number on the door twice. Then she heard a strange noise coming from the kitchen. Someone was moving around and whispering. Her heart was pounding as she walked slowly towards the sound.

Suddenly, the kitchen door flew open and her younger brother jumped out. 'Surprise!' he shouted. Sofia laughed with relief and hugged him. 'It isn't my birthday until next month!' she said.

Her brother's face went red. He had read the date on the calendar wrong, and the party guests were arriving in ten minutes.

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