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반전 결말이 있는 이야기

A story with a surprise ending

과거 시제, 연결어, 묘사하는 표현을 사용해 뜻밖의 결말로 이어지는 짧은 이야기를 씁니다.

짧은 이야기 쓰기는 시험에 자주 나오는 쓰기 과제이며 과거 시제를 연습하기에 좋은 방법입니다. 반전 결말이 있는 이야기는 독자가 한 가지를 예상하게 만들었다가 마지막에 다른 것을 보여 줍니다. 첫 문단에서 배경을 소개하고, 중간에서 사건을 쌓아 가며, 반전은 마지막 몇 문장을 위해 아껴 두세요. 여러 과거 시제를 섞고 묘사하는 단어를 쓰면 이야기가 더 생생해집니다.

모범 글

The note under the door

It was a cold, windy evening in November, and Kofi was reading on the sofa when he heard a quiet noise at the front door. Someone had pushed a small white envelope under it.

Inside there was a note in neat handwriting: 'I know what you did last Tuesday. Meet me at the bus stop at eight.' Kofi's heart was beating fast. What had he done last Tuesday? He had been to work, he had cooked dinner and he had gone for a walk in the park. Nothing strange at all.

At eight o'clock, he walked nervously to the bus stop. An old woman was standing there, holding a large cake. 'You're the young man who rescued my cat from a tree in the park last Tuesday,' she said with a smile. 'This cake is to say thank you.'

유용한 표현

시제쓰임예
Past simplethe main events, one after anotherHe opened the door and looked outside.
Past continuousbackground, or an action in progressIt was raining and the wind was blowing.
Past perfectan action before another past actionSomeone had left a parcel on the step.
  • Suddenly, the lights went out.
  • At first, nothing happened. Then the door slowly opened.
  • She held her breath and opened the box.
  • To his surprise, the room was full of people.
  • It was only then that she realised the truth.

연습 1 / 2

과거 시제와 이야기 표현

가장 알맞은 형태나 표현을 고르세요.

  1. I _____ along the beach when I saw something shiny in the sand.

  2. When we arrived at the station, the train _____.

  3. She opened the box, _____ inside and screamed with joy.

  4. While Aiko _____ dinner, someone knocked on the door.

  5. _____, the lights went out and the room became completely dark.

  6. He was sure he _____ the key in his pocket, but it wasn't there.

  7. To _____ surprise, the shop was completely empty.

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연습 2 / 2

이야기 완성하기

괄호 안 동사를 알맞은 형태로 입력하세요: 과거 단순형, 과거 진행형 또는 과거 완료형.

  1. It (snow) heavily when Lena left the house.

  2. When she got to the bus stop, the last bus (already / leave).

  3. She (decide) to walk home through the park.

  4. While she (cross) the bridge, she heard a strange sound.

  5. A small dog (sit) under a tree, shaking with cold.

  6. She (pick) it up and carried it home.

  7. The next morning, she discovered that the dog (run) away from a farm two days earlier.

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직접 해 보기

쓰기 과제

학교 잡지 공모전에 낼 짧은 이야기를 쓰세요. 이야기는 반드시 이 문장으로 시작해야 합니다: 'When Sofia opened the door, she couldn't believe her eyes.' 결말이 독자에게 반전이 되도록 하세요.

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검사는 오픈소스 검사기 Harper로 사용 중인 기기에서 실행되므로 글이 어디에도 전송되지 않습니다. 흔한 실수를 많이 찾아내지만 모두 찾지는 못하며, 내용의 좋고 나쁨은 판단하지 않습니다. Harper 라이선스

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내 글

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모범 답안

When Sofia opened the door, she couldn't believe her eyes. Her small flat, which she had left tidy that morning, was full of boxes, balloons and paper chains.

At first she thought she was in the wrong flat. She checked the number on the door twice. Then she heard a strange noise coming from the kitchen. Someone was moving around and whispering. Her heart was pounding as she walked slowly towards the sound.

Suddenly, the kitchen door flew open and her younger brother jumped out. 'Surprise!' he shouted. Sofia laughed with relief and hugged him. 'It isn't my birthday until next month!' she said.

Her brother's face went red. He had read the date on the calendar wrong, and the party guests were arriving in ten minutes.

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