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B1رسائل البريد الإلكتروني25 دقيقة

رسالة بريد إلكتروني غير رسمية لتقديم نصيحة

An informal email giving advice

ردّ على صديق لديه مشكلة: أظهر أنك تفهمه، وقدّم نصيحة واضحة مع أسبابها، وأنهِ الرسالة بأسلوب ودّي.

عندما يكتب لك صديق عن مشكلة، يمكنك الرد برسالة بريد إلكتروني تقدّم فيها نصيحة. رسالة النصيحة الجيدة ودودة وغير رسمية. تبدأ عادةً بشكر صديقك على رسالته وإظهار أنك تفهم شعوره. ثم تقدّم نصيحتين أو ثلاث مع الأسباب، وتنتهي بتشجيع صديقك وطلب أن يخبرك بما سيحدث.

نص نموذجي

Re: Feeling nervous about the new job

Hi Ravi,

Thanks for your email. It's completely normal to feel nervous before starting a new job, so please don't worry too much. I felt exactly the same last year.

First of all, I think you should plan your journey and do a practice trip this weekend. That way, you won't be stressed about being late on the first morning. Another idea is to write down a few questions to ask your manager, because it shows that you're interested. If I were you, I'd also try to have lunch with your new colleagues instead of eating alone. It's the easiest way to make friends.

Anyway, try to enjoy it, and remember that nobody expects you to know everything on day one. I'm sure you'll be brilliant. Let me know how your first day goes!

Take care,

Mina

عبارات مفيدة

الغرضعبارات مفيدة
Respond to the problemThanks for your email. / I'm sorry to hear that ... / I know how you feel.
ReassureDon't worry too much. / It's completely normal to ...
Give adviceI think you should ... / You could ... / Why don't you ...?
Stronger adviceIf I were you, I'd ... / You really ought to ...
Give a reasonThat way, ... / ... because ... / It's a good idea because ...
Add another ideaAnother idea is to ... / Also, ... / It might also help to ...
FinishI hope this helps. / Let me know how it goes! / Good luck!

التمرين 1 من 2

تقديم النصيحة

اختر الكلمة أو الجملة الأنسب.

  1. Why don't you _____ to your teacher about it?

  2. If I were you, I _____ book the tickets now.

  3. You should _____ a list of everything you need.

  4. I'm really sorry _____ that you've been ill.

  5. Try to go to bed earlier. _____, you'll feel less tired in the mornings.

  6. Which sentence sounds most like friendly advice?

  7. Which is the best way to end an advice email to a friend?

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التمرين 2 من 2

أكمل النصيحة

اكتب كلمة واحدة في كل فراغ.

  1. I'm sorry to that you're having problems with your flatmate.

  2. Why you invite her for a coffee and talk about it?

  3. If I you, I'd write a list of house rules together.

  4. You ought talk to her before the problem gets worse.

  5. It's a good to stay calm when you talk to her.

  6. I this helps. Good luck!

  7. Let me how it goes!

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دورك

مهمة كتابة

كتبت لك صديقتك Lena: 'I want to get fitter, but I never have time and I always give up after a week. What should I do?' اكتب رسالة بريد إلكتروني إلى Lena. أظهر أنك تفهمها، وقدّم لها ثلاث نصائح على الأقل مع الأسباب، وأنهِ الرسالة بأسلوب ودّي.

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يجري الفحص على جهازك باستخدام Harper، وهي أداة تدقيق مفتوحة المصدر، لذلك لا يُرسل نصك إلى أي مكان. تكتشف كثيرًا من الأخطاء الشائعة، لكن ليس كلها، ولا تحكم على أفكارك. ترخيص Harper

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الإجابة النموذجية

Hi Lena,

Thanks for your message. I know exactly how you feel, because I used to give up on exercise all the time too.

First of all, I think you should start with something small, like a twenty-minute walk three times a week. That way, it won't feel like a huge effort and you'll be more likely to continue. Why don't you also find a friend to exercise with? It's much harder to cancel when someone is waiting for you. If I were you, I'd choose an activity I really enjoy, such as dancing or cycling, instead of something that feels like a punishment. Finally, you could keep a simple diary of your workouts, so you can see your progress.

I hope this helps. Let me know how you get on!

Best wishes,

Aiko

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