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رسالة بريد إلكتروني غير رسمية لتقديم نصيحة

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ردّ على صديق لديه مشكلة: أظهر أنك تفهمه، وقدّم نصيحة واضحة مع أسبابها، وأنهِ الرسالة بأسلوب ودّي.

Re: Feeling nervous about the new job

Hi Ravi,

Thanks for your email. It's completely normal to feel nervous before starting a new job, so please don't worry too much. I felt exactly the same last year.

First of all, I think you should plan your journey and do a practice trip this weekend. That way, you won't be stressed about being late on the first morning. Another idea is to write down a few questions to ask your manager, because it shows that you're interested. If I were you, I'd also try to have lunch with your new colleagues instead of eating alone. It's the easiest way to make friends.

Anyway, try to enjoy it, and remember that nobody expects you to know everything on day one. I'm sure you'll be brilliant. Let me know how your first day goes!

Take care,

Mina

تقديم النصيحة

اختر الكلمة أو الجملة الأنسب.

  1. Why don't you ___ to your teacher about it?
    • a) talk
    • b) to talk
    • c) talking
  2. If I were you, I ___ book the tickets now.
    • a) will
    • b) would
    • c) am
  3. You should ___ a list of everything you need.
    • a) to make
    • b) making
    • c) make
  4. I'm really sorry ___ that you've been ill.
    • a) for hearing
    • b) to hear
    • c) hear
  5. Try to go to bed earlier. ___, you'll feel less tired in the mornings.
    • a) Instead
    • b) That way
    • c) Although
  6. Which sentence sounds most like friendly advice?
    • a) You must stop playing video games.
    • b) Stop playing games immediately.
    • c) Maybe you could set a time limit for games.
  7. Which is the best way to end an advice email to a friend?
    • a) I hope this helps. Let me know how it goes!
    • b) I look forward to receiving your reply at your earliest convenience.
    • c) Please find the advice attached.

أكمل النصيحة

اكتب كلمة واحدة في كل فراغ.

  1. I'm sorry to ___ that you're having problems with your flatmate.
  2. Why ___ you invite her for a coffee and talk about it?
  3. If I ___ you, I'd write a list of house rules together.
  4. You ought ___ talk to her before the problem gets worse.
  5. It's a good ___ to stay calm when you talk to her.
  6. I ___ this helps. Good luck!
  7. Let me ___ how it goes!

مهمة كتابة

كتبت لك صديقتك Lena: 'I want to get fitter, but I never have time and I always give up after a week. What should I do?' اكتب رسالة بريد إلكتروني إلى Lena. أظهر أنك تفهمها، وقدّم لها ثلاث نصائح على الأقل مع الأسباب، وأنهِ الرسالة بأسلوب ودّي.

120–180 كلمة

راجع كتابتك

  • بدأتُ بشكر Lena أو بالتعليق على مشكلتها.
  • أظهرتُ أنني أفهم شعورها.
  • قدّمتُ ثلاث نصائح على الأقل باستخدام عبارات مختلفة.
  • ذكرتُ سببًا لكل نصيحة.
  • استخدمتُ أدوات ربط مثل First of all وAnother idea وThat way.
  • أنهيتُ الرسالة بأسلوب ودّي وطلبتُ منها أن تخبرني كيف تسير الأمور.

مفتاح الإجابات

تقديم النصيحة

  1. a) talkبعد Why don't you نستخدم الفعل في صيغته الأساسية بدون to: Why don't you talk ...؟
  2. b) wouldبعد If I were you يأتي I would (I'd) + الفعل في صيغته الأساسية.
  3. c) makeبعد Should يأتي الفعل في صيغته الأساسية بدون to: you should make.
  4. b) to hearالعبارة الثابتة هي I'm sorry to hear that ...
  5. b) That wayThat way تعني 'إذا فعلتَ هذا'. وهي تقدّم النتيجة الجيدة للنصيحة.
  6. c) Maybe you could set a time limit for games.Maybe you could ... عبارة لطيفة وودّية. أما Must والأوامر المباشرة فتبدو قوية جدًّا بين الأصدقاء.
  7. a) I hope this helps. Let me know how it goes!هذه الخاتمة دافئة وغير رسمية. أما الخياران الآخران فعبارتان رسميتان لرسائل العمل.

أكمل النصيحة

  1. hearI'm sorry to hear that ... تُظهر أنك تفهم المشكلة.
  2. don'tWhy don't you + base verb? طريقة ودّية لتقديم اقتراح.
  3. wereالعبارة الثابتة للنصيحة هي If I were you, I'd ... قد تسمع If I was you في الكلام، لكن were هي الصيغة المعيارية.
  4. toيأتي بعد Ought دائمًا to + الفعل في صيغته الأساسية: you ought to talk.
  5. ideaIt's a good idea to ... طريقة شائعة لتقديم النصيحة.
  6. hopeI hope this helps جملة ودّية لإنهاء نصيحتك.
  7. knowLet me know تعني 'أخبرني'. وهي تُظهر أنك تهتم بما سيحدث بعد ذلك.

إجابة نموذجية

Hi Lena,

Thanks for your message. I know exactly how you feel, because I used to give up on exercise all the time too.

First of all, I think you should start with something small, like a twenty-minute walk three times a week. That way, it won't feel like a huge effort and you'll be more likely to continue. Why don't you also find a friend to exercise with? It's much harder to cancel when someone is waiting for you. If I were you, I'd choose an activity I really enjoy, such as dancing or cycling, instead of something that feels like a punishment. Finally, you could keep a simple diary of your workouts, so you can see your progress.

I hope this helps. Let me know how you get on!

Best wishes,

Aiko

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