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조언을 해 주는 비격식 이메일

An informal email giving advice

문제가 있는 친구에게 답장을 씁니다. 상대를 이해한다는 것을 보여 주고, 이유와 함께 분명한 조언을 하며, 다정하게 마무리합니다.

친구가 문제에 대해 편지를 보내면 조언을 담은 이메일로 답장할 수 있습니다. 좋은 조언 이메일은 따뜻하고 비격식적입니다. 보통 편지를 보내 줘서 고맙다고 하고 친구의 기분을 이해한다는 것을 보여 주며 시작합니다. 그다음 이유와 함께 두세 가지 조언을 하고, 친구를 격려하며 어떻게 되었는지 알려 달라고 부탁하면서 끝맺습니다.

모범 글

Re: Feeling nervous about the new job

Hi Ravi,

Thanks for your email. It's completely normal to feel nervous before starting a new job, so please don't worry too much. I felt exactly the same last year.

First of all, I think you should plan your journey and do a practice trip this weekend. That way, you won't be stressed about being late on the first morning. Another idea is to write down a few questions to ask your manager, because it shows that you're interested. If I were you, I'd also try to have lunch with your new colleagues instead of eating alone. It's the easiest way to make friends.

Anyway, try to enjoy it, and remember that nobody expects you to know everything on day one. I'm sure you'll be brilliant. Let me know how your first day goes!

Take care,

Mina

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목적유용한 표현
Respond to the problemThanks for your email. / I'm sorry to hear that ... / I know how you feel.
ReassureDon't worry too much. / It's completely normal to ...
Give adviceI think you should ... / You could ... / Why don't you ...?
Stronger adviceIf I were you, I'd ... / You really ought to ...
Give a reasonThat way, ... / ... because ... / It's a good idea because ...
Add another ideaAnother idea is to ... / Also, ... / It might also help to ...
FinishI hope this helps. / Let me know how it goes! / Good luck!

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조언하기

가장 알맞은 단어나 문장을 고르세요.

  1. Why don't you _____ to your teacher about it?

  2. If I were you, I _____ book the tickets now.

  3. You should _____ a list of everything you need.

  4. I'm really sorry _____ that you've been ill.

  5. Try to go to bed earlier. _____, you'll feel less tired in the mornings.

  6. Which sentence sounds most like friendly advice?

  7. Which is the best way to end an advice email to a friend?

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조언 완성하기

빈칸마다 단어를 하나씩 입력하세요.

  1. I'm sorry to that you're having problems with your flatmate.

  2. Why you invite her for a coffee and talk about it?

  3. If I you, I'd write a list of house rules together.

  4. You ought talk to her before the problem gets worse.

  5. It's a good to stay calm when you talk to her.

  6. I this helps. Good luck!

  7. Let me how it goes!

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쓰기 과제

친구 Lena가 당신에게 편지를 보냈습니다. 'I want to get fitter, but I never have time and I always give up after a week. What should I do?' Lena에게 이메일을 쓰세요. 그녀를 이해한다는 것을 보여 주고, 이유와 함께 조언을 세 가지 이상 하며, 다정하게 마무리하세요.

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검사는 오픈소스 검사기 Harper로 사용 중인 기기에서 실행되므로 글이 어디에도 전송되지 않습니다. 흔한 실수를 많이 찾아내지만 모두 찾지는 못하며, 내용의 좋고 나쁨은 판단하지 않습니다. Harper 라이선스

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모범 답안

Hi Lena,

Thanks for your message. I know exactly how you feel, because I used to give up on exercise all the time too.

First of all, I think you should start with something small, like a twenty-minute walk three times a week. That way, it won't feel like a huge effort and you'll be more likely to continue. Why don't you also find a friend to exercise with? It's much harder to cancel when someone is waiting for you. If I were you, I'd choose an activity I really enjoy, such as dancing or cycling, instead of something that feels like a punishment. Finally, you could keep a simple diary of your workouts, so you can see your progress.

I hope this helps. Let me know how you get on!

Best wishes,

Aiko

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