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의견을 담은 문단

이름:날짜:

질문에 대한 내 의견을 밝히고, 이유와 예시로 뒷받침하며, 결론으로 끝나는 잘 짜인 문단을 씁니다.

Should children learn to cook at school?

In my opinion, every child should learn to cook at school. Firstly, cooking is an essential life skill. Many young people leave home without knowing how to make a simple, healthy meal, so they end up eating unhealthy snacks. Secondly, cooking lessons can make other subjects more interesting. For example, children use maths when they weigh ingredients and science when they see how heat changes food. Finally, cooking together teaches teamwork, because students have to share tasks and tools. Some people argue that there is no time in the school day for practical subjects. However, I believe that even one hour a week would make a big difference. To sum up, cooking lessons help children to become healthier, more confident and more independent.

연결어와 주제문

가장 알맞은 단어, 표현 또는 문장을 고르세요.

  1. Topic sentence: ___, public transport should be free for all students.
    • a) In my opinion
    • b) For instance
    • c) Such as
  2. Walking to school is healthy. ___, it is better for the environment than driving.
    • a) However
    • b) In addition
    • c) For example
  3. Many teenagers have hobbies ___ painting, music or sport.
    • a) like as
    • b) such as
    • c) as such
  4. Some people say homework is useless. ___, I believe it helps students to remember what they learn.
    • a) Therefore
    • b) For example
    • c) However
  5. ___, there are many good reasons to learn a second language.
    • a) Such as
    • b) Firstly of all
    • c) To sum up
  6. Which is the best topic sentence for a paragraph about sport at school?
    • a) I play football on Saturdays.
    • b) Sport should be a compulsory part of every school day.
    • c) Football, basketball and tennis.
  7. Which sentence does NOT belong in a paragraph arguing that people should read more books?
    • a) Reading improves your vocabulary and concentration.
    • b) Books help us understand people from other cultures.
    • c) My favourite colour is green.

문단 완성하기

이 문장들은 도시 공원에 관한 문단에서 가져온 것입니다. 빈칸마다 단어를 하나씩 입력하세요.

  1. In my ___, cities need more green spaces.
  2. ___ example, a short walk in a park can reduce stress.
  3. What is ___, trees help to keep the air clean.
  4. Some people ___ that parks are too expensive to look after.
  5. It is true ___ parks cost money, but they also save money on healthcare.
  6. To ___ up, more parks would make our cities healthier and happier.

쓰기 과제

다음 질문에 답하는 의견 문단을 쓰세요: 'Is it better to live in a city or in the countryside?' 분명한 주제문으로 시작하고, 예시와 함께 이유를 두 가지 이상 들고, 반대 입장을 언급한 뒤, 결론 문장으로 끝맺으세요.

120–180단어

내 글 확인

  • 첫 문장에 내 의견이 분명하게 드러납니다.
  • 이유를 두 가지 이상 들고, 각각 예시나 설명을 덧붙였습니다.
  • Firstly, In addition, For example 같은 연결어를 사용했습니다.
  • 반대 의견을 언급하고 However로 그에 답했습니다.
  • 마지막 문장에서 내 의견을 다른 말로 요약했습니다.
  • 모든 문장이 중심 주제에 관한 것입니다.

정답

연결어와 주제문

  1. a) In my opinion주제문은 내 의견을 밝히므로 In my opinion이 가장 좋은 시작입니다.
  2. b) In additionIn addition은 같은 생각을 뒷받침하는 다른 이유를 덧붙입니다. However는 대조를 이끕니다.
  3. b) such asSuch as는 예시를 이끕니다. Like as와 as such는 여기에서는 올바르지 않습니다.
  4. c) HoweverHowever는 반대 의견 뒤에 나의 대조되는 견해를 이끕니다.
  5. c) To sum upTo sum up은 결론 문장을 이끕니다. Firstly of all은 올바르지 않으니 First of all 또는 Firstly를 쓰세요.
  6. b) Sport should be a compulsory part of every school day.주제문은 문단이 뒷받침할 수 있는 분명한 의견을 제시합니다. 나머지는 개인적인 사실과 목록입니다.
  7. c) My favourite colour is green.모든 문장은 중심 생각을 뒷받침해야 합니다. 가장 좋아하는 색은 읽기와 아무 관련이 없습니다.

문단 완성하기

  1. opinion / viewIn my opinion(또는 In my view)은 주제문에서 내 의견을 이끕니다.
  2. forFor example은 이유를 뒷받침하는 예시를 이끕니다.
  3. moreWhat is more는 In addition처럼 다른 요점을 덧붙입니다.
  4. argue / say / think / believe / claim / feel / worry / complain / suggestSome people argue that ...은 반대 의견을 이끕니다.
  5. thatIt is true that ..., but ...은 상대 견해의 일부를 인정한 다음 그에 대해 반박합니다.
  6. sumTo sum up은 결론 문장을 이끕니다.

모범 답안

Personally, I believe it is better to live in the countryside than in a city. Firstly, life in the countryside is much calmer and healthier. The air is cleaner, and there is less traffic noise, so people often sleep better and feel less stressed. Secondly, it is easier to spend time in nature. For instance, you can go for a walk in the fields or grow your own vegetables in a garden. In addition, small communities are often friendlier, because neighbours know and help each other. It is true that cities offer more jobs, shops and entertainment. However, many people can now work from home, and towns are usually not far away. For these reasons, I think the countryside offers a better quality of life.

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