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의견을 담은 문단

An opinion paragraph

질문에 대한 내 의견을 밝히고, 이유와 예시로 뒷받침하며, 결론으로 끝나는 잘 짜인 문단을 씁니다.

의견 문단은 'Should students wear a uniform?' 같은 질문에 답합니다. 내 의견을 분명하게 밝히는 주제문으로 시작합니다. 그다음 두세 가지 이유를 들고, 각각 예시나 설명으로 뒷받침하며, 주된 생각을 다른 말로 다시 말하는 결론 문장으로 끝맺습니다. 연결어는 생각들이 서로 어떻게 이어지는지 독자에게 보여 줍니다.

모범 글

Should children learn to cook at school?

In my opinion, every child should learn to cook at school. Firstly, cooking is an essential life skill. Many young people leave home without knowing how to make a simple, healthy meal, so they end up eating unhealthy snacks. Secondly, cooking lessons can make other subjects more interesting. For example, children use maths when they weigh ingredients and science when they see how heat changes food. Finally, cooking together teaches teamwork, because students have to share tasks and tools. Some people argue that there is no time in the school day for practical subjects. However, I believe that even one hour a week would make a big difference. To sum up, cooking lessons help children to become healthier, more confident and more independent.

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State your opinionIn my opinion, ... / I strongly believe that ... / Personally, I think ...
Order your reasonsFirstly, ... / Secondly, ... / Another reason is that ... / Finally, ...
Give an exampleFor example, ... / For instance, ... / ... such as ...
Add an ideaIn addition, ... / What is more, ... / Also, ...
Show the other sideSome people argue that ... / It is true that ..., but ...
ContrastHowever, ... / On the other hand, ...
ConcludeTo sum up, ... / In conclusion, ... / For these reasons, ...

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연결어와 주제문

가장 알맞은 단어, 표현 또는 문장을 고르세요.

  1. Topic sentence: _____, public transport should be free for all students.

  2. Walking to school is healthy. _____, it is better for the environment than driving.

  3. Many teenagers have hobbies _____ painting, music or sport.

  4. Some people say homework is useless. _____, I believe it helps students to remember what they learn.

  5. _____, there are many good reasons to learn a second language.

  6. Which is the best topic sentence for a paragraph about sport at school?

  7. Which sentence does NOT belong in a paragraph arguing that people should read more books?

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연습 2 / 2

문단 완성하기

이 문장들은 도시 공원에 관한 문단에서 가져온 것입니다. 빈칸마다 단어를 하나씩 입력하세요.

  1. In my , cities need more green spaces.

  2. example, a short walk in a park can reduce stress.

  3. What is , trees help to keep the air clean.

  4. Some people that parks are too expensive to look after.

  5. It is true parks cost money, but they also save money on healthcare.

  6. To up, more parks would make our cities healthier and happier.

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쓰기 과제

다음 질문에 답하는 의견 문단을 쓰세요: 'Is it better to live in a city or in the countryside?' 분명한 주제문으로 시작하고, 예시와 함께 이유를 두 가지 이상 들고, 반대 입장을 언급한 뒤, 결론 문장으로 끝맺으세요.

0단어

검사는 오픈소스 검사기 Harper로 사용 중인 기기에서 실행되므로 글이 어디에도 전송되지 않습니다. 흔한 실수를 많이 찾아내지만 모두 찾지는 못하며, 내용의 좋고 나쁨은 판단하지 않습니다. Harper 라이선스

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내 글

아직 아무것도 쓰지 않았습니다.

모범 답안

Personally, I believe it is better to live in the countryside than in a city. Firstly, life in the countryside is much calmer and healthier. The air is cleaner, and there is less traffic noise, so people often sleep better and feel less stressed. Secondly, it is easier to spend time in nature. For instance, you can go for a walk in the fields or grow your own vegetables in a garden. In addition, small communities are often friendlier, because neighbours know and help each other. It is true that cities offer more jobs, shops and entertainment. However, many people can now work from home, and towns are usually not far away. For these reasons, I think the countryside offers a better quality of life.

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