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조언을 해 주는 비격식 이메일

이름:날짜:

문제가 있는 친구에게 답장을 씁니다. 상대를 이해한다는 것을 보여 주고, 이유와 함께 분명한 조언을 하며, 다정하게 마무리합니다.

Re: Feeling nervous about the new job

Hi Ravi,

Thanks for your email. It's completely normal to feel nervous before starting a new job, so please don't worry too much. I felt exactly the same last year.

First of all, I think you should plan your journey and do a practice trip this weekend. That way, you won't be stressed about being late on the first morning. Another idea is to write down a few questions to ask your manager, because it shows that you're interested. If I were you, I'd also try to have lunch with your new colleagues instead of eating alone. It's the easiest way to make friends.

Anyway, try to enjoy it, and remember that nobody expects you to know everything on day one. I'm sure you'll be brilliant. Let me know how your first day goes!

Take care,

Mina

조언하기

가장 알맞은 단어나 문장을 고르세요.

  1. Why don't you ___ to your teacher about it?
    • a) talk
    • b) to talk
    • c) talking
  2. If I were you, I ___ book the tickets now.
    • a) will
    • b) would
    • c) am
  3. You should ___ a list of everything you need.
    • a) to make
    • b) making
    • c) make
  4. I'm really sorry ___ that you've been ill.
    • a) for hearing
    • b) to hear
    • c) hear
  5. Try to go to bed earlier. ___, you'll feel less tired in the mornings.
    • a) Instead
    • b) That way
    • c) Although
  6. Which sentence sounds most like friendly advice?
    • a) You must stop playing video games.
    • b) Stop playing games immediately.
    • c) Maybe you could set a time limit for games.
  7. Which is the best way to end an advice email to a friend?
    • a) I hope this helps. Let me know how it goes!
    • b) I look forward to receiving your reply at your earliest convenience.
    • c) Please find the advice attached.

조언 완성하기

빈칸마다 단어를 하나씩 입력하세요.

  1. I'm sorry to ___ that you're having problems with your flatmate.
  2. Why ___ you invite her for a coffee and talk about it?
  3. If I ___ you, I'd write a list of house rules together.
  4. You ought ___ talk to her before the problem gets worse.
  5. It's a good ___ to stay calm when you talk to her.
  6. I ___ this helps. Good luck!
  7. Let me ___ how it goes!

쓰기 과제

친구 Lena가 당신에게 편지를 보냈습니다. 'I want to get fitter, but I never have time and I always give up after a week. What should I do?' Lena에게 이메일을 쓰세요. 그녀를 이해한다는 것을 보여 주고, 이유와 함께 조언을 세 가지 이상 하며, 다정하게 마무리하세요.

120–180단어

내 글 확인

  • Lena에게 고마움을 전하거나 그녀의 문제에 답하는 것으로 시작했습니다.
  • 그녀의 기분을 이해한다는 것을 보여 주었습니다.
  • 서로 다른 표현을 사용해 조언을 세 가지 이상 했습니다.
  • 각 조언마다 이유를 들었습니다.
  • First of all, Another idea, That way 같은 연결어를 사용했습니다.
  • 다정하게 마무리하고, 어떻게 되었는지 알려 달라고 부탁했습니다.

정답

조언하기

  1. a) talkWhy don't you 뒤에는 to 없이 동사원형을 씁니다: Why don't you talk ...?
  2. b) wouldIf I were you 뒤에는 I would(I'd) + 동사원형이 옵니다.
  3. c) makeShould 뒤에는 to 없이 동사원형이 옵니다: you should make.
  4. b) to hear고정 표현은 I'm sorry to hear that ...입니다.
  5. b) That wayThat way는 '이렇게 하면'이라는 뜻입니다. 조언을 따랐을 때의 좋은 결과를 이끕니다.
  6. c) Maybe you could set a time limit for games.Maybe you could ...는 부드럽고 다정한 표현입니다. Must나 직접적인 명령은 친구 사이에서 너무 강하게 들립니다.
  7. a) I hope this helps. Let me know how it goes!이 맺음말은 따뜻하고 비격식적입니다. 나머지 두 개는 업무용 이메일에 쓰는 격식 표현입니다.

조언 완성하기

  1. hearI'm sorry to hear that ...은 상대의 문제를 이해한다는 것을 보여 줍니다.
  2. don'tWhy don't you + 동사원형?은 다정하게 제안하는 방법입니다.
  3. were조언할 때의 고정 표현은 If I were you, I'd ...입니다. 말할 때는 If I was you를 들을 수도 있지만, 표준 형태는 were입니다.
  4. toOught 뒤에는 항상 to + 동사원형이 옵니다: you ought to talk.
  5. ideaIt's a good idea to ...는 조언할 때 흔히 쓰는 표현입니다.
  6. hopeI hope this helps는 조언을 마무리하는 다정한 문장입니다.
  7. knowLet me know는 '나에게 알려 줘'라는 뜻입니다. 다음에 어떻게 될지 신경 쓰고 있음을 보여 줍니다.

모범 답안

Hi Lena,

Thanks for your message. I know exactly how you feel, because I used to give up on exercise all the time too.

First of all, I think you should start with something small, like a twenty-minute walk three times a week. That way, it won't feel like a huge effort and you'll be more likely to continue. Why don't you also find a friend to exercise with? It's much harder to cancel when someone is waiting for you. If I were you, I'd choose an activity I really enjoy, such as dancing or cycling, instead of something that feels like a punishment. Finally, you could keep a simple diary of your workouts, so you can see your progress.

I hope this helps. Let me know how you get on!

Best wishes,

Aiko

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