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意見を述べる段落

An opinion paragraph

質問に対する自分の意見を、理由と例で裏付け、結論で締めくくる、よく整理された段落を書きましょう。

意見を述べる段落は、「Should students wear a uniform?」のような質問に答えます。まず、自分の意見をはっきり述べるトピックセンテンスで始めます。次に、それぞれ例や説明で裏付けた2つか3つの理由を挙げ、主な考えを別の言葉で言い直す結びの文で終えます。つなぎ言葉は、考えどうしのつながりを読み手に示します。

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Should children learn to cook at school?

In my opinion, every child should learn to cook at school. Firstly, cooking is an essential life skill. Many young people leave home without knowing how to make a simple, healthy meal, so they end up eating unhealthy snacks. Secondly, cooking lessons can make other subjects more interesting. For example, children use maths when they weigh ingredients and science when they see how heat changes food. Finally, cooking together teaches teamwork, because students have to share tasks and tools. Some people argue that there is no time in the school day for practical subjects. However, I believe that even one hour a week would make a big difference. To sum up, cooking lessons help children to become healthier, more confident and more independent.

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目的便利な表現
State your opinionIn my opinion, ... / I strongly believe that ... / Personally, I think ...
Order your reasonsFirstly, ... / Secondly, ... / Another reason is that ... / Finally, ...
Give an exampleFor example, ... / For instance, ... / ... such as ...
Add an ideaIn addition, ... / What is more, ... / Also, ...
Show the other sideSome people argue that ... / It is true that ..., but ...
ContrastHowever, ... / On the other hand, ...
ConcludeTo sum up, ... / In conclusion, ... / For these reasons, ...

練習問題 1/2

つなぎ言葉とトピックセンテンス

最も適切な語、句、または文を選びましょう。

  1. Topic sentence: _____, public transport should be free for all students.

  2. Walking to school is healthy. _____, it is better for the environment than driving.

  3. Many teenagers have hobbies _____ painting, music or sport.

  4. Some people say homework is useless. _____, I believe it helps students to remember what they learn.

  5. _____, there are many good reasons to learn a second language.

  6. Which is the best topic sentence for a paragraph about sport at school?

  7. Which sentence does NOT belong in a paragraph arguing that people should read more books?

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練習問題 2/2

段落を完成させる

これらの文は、市内の公園についての段落からのものです。各空所に1語を入力しましょう。

  1. In my , cities need more green spaces.

  2. example, a short walk in a park can reduce stress.

  3. What is , trees help to keep the air clean.

  4. Some people that parks are too expensive to look after.

  5. It is true parks cost money, but they also save money on healthcare.

  6. To up, more parks would make our cities healthier and happier.

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ライティング課題

次の質問に答える、意見を述べる段落を書きましょう：「Is it better to live in a city or in the countryside?」はっきりしたトピックセンテンスで始め、例を添えて少なくとも2つの理由を挙げ、反対の立場にも触れ、結びの文で終えてください。

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Personally, I believe it is better to live in the countryside than in a city. Firstly, life in the countryside is much calmer and healthier. The air is cleaner, and there is less traffic noise, so people often sleep better and feel less stressed. Secondly, it is easier to spend time in nature. For instance, you can go for a walk in the fields or grow your own vegetables in a garden. In addition, small communities are often friendlier, because neighbours know and help each other. It is true that cities offer more jobs, shops and entertainment. However, many people can now work from home, and towns are usually not far away. For these reasons, I think the countryside offers a better quality of life.

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