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A for-and-against essay

어떤 문제에 대해 양쪽의 주장을 제시한 다음 자신의 결론에 이르는 균형 잡힌 에세이를 씁니다.

찬반 에세이는 결론에 이르기 전에 양쪽의 주장을 제시하여 주제를 객관적으로 논의합니다. 격식 있고 비개인적인 문체로 씁니다. 흔한 구조는 문제를 중립적으로 소개하는 도입, 찬성 주장을 담은 문단 하나, 반대 주장을 담은 문단 하나, 그리고 양쪽을 저울질하고 적절하다면 자신의 의견을 밝히는 결론입니다.

모범 글

Should homework be banned in primary schools?

Homework has long been a standard part of school life, yet an increasing number of parents and teachers are questioning its value for younger children. There are strong arguments on both sides of this debate.

On the one hand, banning homework could have several benefits. Young children who spend six hours a day in the classroom need time to play, rest and develop interests outside school. Moreover, homework can create tension at home, particularly when parents are too busy or lack the knowledge to help. Some researchers also suggest that, at this age, homework has little measurable effect on achievement.

On the other hand, regular homework can teach children valuable habits such as organisation and independent study. In addition, short tasks like reading with a parent help families stay informed about what their children are learning. Critics of a ban argue that abolishing homework entirely might make the transition to secondary school, where workloads are heavier, more difficult.

In conclusion, while excessive homework is clearly unhelpful for young learners, a complete ban may go too far. In my view, a limited amount of enjoyable, practical homework offers the best balance.

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Introduce the issue... has become a widely debated issue. / There are strong arguments on both sides.
Arguments forOn the one hand, ... / One advantage of ... is that ... / Supporters argue that ...
Arguments againstOn the other hand, ... / A major drawback is that ... / Critics claim that ...
Add a pointMoreover, ... / In addition, ... / Furthermore, ... / What is more, ...
Contrast in one sentenceWhile / Although + clause, ... / ..., whereas + clause / Despite + noun or -ing
Impersonal languageIt is often argued that ... / It could be said that ... / Many people believe that ...
ConclusionIn conclusion, ... / All things considered, ... / On balance, ...

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가장 알맞은 단어, 표현 또는 문장을 고르세요.

  1. _____ the high cost, many families choose to send their children to summer camps.

  2. _____ online learning is flexible, some students find it hard to stay motivated.

  3. Electric cars produce less pollution in cities. _____, they are still too expensive for many drivers.

  4. Some people prefer to work alone, _____ others are more productive in a team.

  5. _____, the advantages of a four-day school week outweigh the disadvantages.

  6. Which sentence is the most suitable for the main body of a for-and-against essay?

  7. A major _____ of working from home is the lack of contact with colleagues.

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'Should schools replace printed textbooks with tablets?'라는 제목의 에세이에서 가져온 각 문장을 읽으세요. 그 문장이 들어갈 에세이의 부분을 고르세요.

  1. Many schools are deciding whether to replace printed textbooks with tablets, and opinions are divided.

  2. Critics claim that looking at screens for hours can cause tiredness and headaches.

  3. Supporters argue that tablets can hold hundreds of books, so students carry less weight.

  4. A major drawback is that tablets are expensive to buy and repair.

  5. Furthermore, digital textbooks can be updated instantly when information changes.

  6. On balance, a mix of printed books and digital resources seems the most sensible approach.

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선생님이 'Should teenagers have a part-time job while they are still at school?'라는 제목으로 찬반 에세이를 쓰라고 하셨습니다. 양쪽의 주장을 제시하고 결론에서 자신의 의견을 밝히세요.

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검사는 오픈소스 검사기 Harper로 사용 중인 기기에서 실행되므로 글이 어디에도 전송되지 않습니다. 흔한 실수를 많이 찾아내지만 모두 찾지는 못하며, 내용의 좋고 나쁨은 판단하지 않습니다. Harper 라이선스

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모범 답안

In many countries, it is common for teenagers to combine their studies with a part-time job, for example in a shop or a café. However, opinions differ as to whether this is a good idea.

On the one hand, a part-time job can teach young people important lessons that school cannot. They learn to manage their time, deal with customers and take responsibility for their own money. Moreover, earning a wage can increase their independence and help them understand the value of hard work. Work experience may also make their CVs more attractive to future employers.

On the other hand, there are serious concerns about the effect on education. Students who work long hours in the evenings or at weekends may have less time for homework and revision, and their results could suffer as a consequence. In addition, tiredness can affect their health and leave little time for friends, sport or hobbies.

In conclusion, a part-time job clearly has both benefits and risks. On balance, I believe it can be a positive experience, provided that teenagers work only a few hours a week and their studies remain the priority.

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