B2 ライティング

B2エッセイ30分

賛否を述べるエッセイ

A for-and-against essay

ある問題について、賛成と反対の両方の意見を示してから自分の結論に至る、バランスのよいエッセイを書きましょう。

賛否を述べるエッセイは、結論に至る前に両方の立場の意見を示すことで、トピックを客観的に論じます。フォーマルで、人称を避けた文体で書きます。よくある構成は、問題を中立的に示す導入、賛成意見の段落、反対意見の段落、そして両方の立場を比べて、適切なら自分の意見を述べる結論です。

お手本の文章

Should homework be banned in primary schools?

Homework has long been a standard part of school life, yet an increasing number of parents and teachers are questioning its value for younger children. There are strong arguments on both sides of this debate.

On the one hand, banning homework could have several benefits. Young children who spend six hours a day in the classroom need time to play, rest and develop interests outside school. Moreover, homework can create tension at home, particularly when parents are too busy or lack the knowledge to help. Some researchers also suggest that, at this age, homework has little measurable effect on achievement.

On the other hand, regular homework can teach children valuable habits such as organisation and independent study. In addition, short tasks like reading with a parent help families stay informed about what their children are learning. Critics of a ban argue that abolishing homework entirely might make the transition to secondary school, where workloads are heavier, more difficult.

In conclusion, while excessive homework is clearly unhelpful for young learners, a complete ban may go too far. In my view, a limited amount of enjoyable, practical homework offers the best balance.

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目的便利な表現
Introduce the issue... has become a widely debated issue. / There are strong arguments on both sides.
Arguments forOn the one hand, ... / One advantage of ... is that ... / Supporters argue that ...
Arguments againstOn the other hand, ... / A major drawback is that ... / Critics claim that ...
Add a pointMoreover, ... / In addition, ... / Furthermore, ... / What is more, ...
Contrast in one sentenceWhile / Although + clause, ... / ..., whereas + clause / Despite + noun or -ing
Impersonal languageIt is often argued that ... / It could be said that ... / Many people believe that ...
ConclusionIn conclusion, ... / All things considered, ... / On balance, ...

練習問題 1/2

対比とバランス

最も適切な語、句、または文を選びましょう。

  1. _____ the high cost, many families choose to send their children to summer camps.

  2. _____ online learning is flexible, some students find it hard to stay motivated.

  3. Electric cars produce less pollution in cities. _____, they are still too expensive for many drivers.

  4. Some people prefer to work alone, _____ others are more productive in a team.

  5. _____, the advantages of a four-day school week outweigh the disadvantages.

  6. Which sentence is the most suitable for the main body of a for-and-against essay?

  7. A major _____ of working from home is the lack of contact with colleagues.

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練習問題 2/2

エッセイの構成を考える

'Should schools replace printed textbooks with tablets?' というタイトルのエッセイの文を読みましょう。それぞれの文がエッセイのどの部分に入るかを選んでください。

  1. Many schools are deciding whether to replace printed textbooks with tablets, and opinions are divided.

  2. Critics claim that looking at screens for hours can cause tiredness and headaches.

  3. Supporters argue that tablets can hold hundreds of books, so students carry less weight.

  4. A major drawback is that tablets are expensive to buy and repair.

  5. Furthermore, digital textbooks can be updated instantly when information changes.

  6. On balance, a mix of printed books and digital resources seems the most sensible approach.

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ライティング課題

先生から、次のタイトルで賛否を述べるエッセイを書くように言われました:「Should teenagers have a part-time job while they are still at school?」両方の立場の意見を示し、結論で自分の意見を述べましょう。

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解答例

In many countries, it is common for teenagers to combine their studies with a part-time job, for example in a shop or a café. However, opinions differ as to whether this is a good idea.

On the one hand, a part-time job can teach young people important lessons that school cannot. They learn to manage their time, deal with customers and take responsibility for their own money. Moreover, earning a wage can increase their independence and help them understand the value of hard work. Work experience may also make their CVs more attractive to future employers.

On the other hand, there are serious concerns about the effect on education. Students who work long hours in the evenings or at weekends may have less time for homework and revision, and their results could suffer as a consequence. In addition, tiredness can affect their health and leave little time for friends, sport or hobbies.

In conclusion, a part-time job clearly has both benefits and risks. On balance, I believe it can be a positive experience, provided that teenagers work only a few hours a week and their studies remain the priority.

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