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Proposal: a shared workshop in the old Marsh Lane depot

To: Greenfield Neighbourhood Council

Introduction. This proposal outlines a plan to convert the disused Marsh Lane depot into a shared workshop where residents can repair, build and learn practical skills. It sets out the need for the project, the activities proposed and the resources required.

The need. At present, residents who wish to mend furniture, bicycles or electrical appliances have nowhere affordable to work. A recent community meeting revealed that many people discard items that could easily be repaired, simply because they lack the tools or the know-how. At the same time, the depot, which has stood empty for six years, is deteriorating and attracting complaints.

What we propose. We propose to equip one hall with workbenches and basic tools, and to open it three evenings a week. Experienced volunteers, many of them retired tradespeople, would run drop-in repair sessions and short courses for beginners. Local schools could also use the space for practical projects during the day.

Benefits. The workshop would reduce waste, bring a neglected building back into use and give residents, particularly older people, a purpose and a place to meet. Furthermore, skills learned there might help some participants find work. Similar schemes elsewhere have attracted steady attendance, which suggests that the demand is real.

Costs and funding. Initial costs are estimated at £8,500 for tools, safety equipment and repairs to the roof. Running costs would be modest, as volunteers would staff the sessions and small charges for materials would cover consumables. We would be grateful if the Council would consider granting use of the building at a nominal rent.

Conclusion. In view of the clear need and the low running costs, we are confident that the workshop would become a valuable community resource. We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan in more detail.

가장 알맞은 것 고르기

공식 제안서에서 가장 효과적인 선택지를 고르세요.

  1. Which sentence best introduces the purpose of a proposal?
    • a) This proposal outlines a plan to convert the depot into a workshop.
    • b) Hi, I have a great idea about the depot.
    • c) You must read this about the depot.
  2. Which sentence presents a benefit with suitable caution?
    • a) The scheme will end all waste in the district.
    • b) The scheme might help to reduce waste and bring a building back into use.
    • c) The scheme is the best possible solution.
  3. We propose ___ the hall with basic tools.
    • a) to equip
    • b) to equipping
    • c) equip
  4. Which sentence is the clearest way to give a cost?
    • a) Costs are estimated at £8,500 for tools and roof repairs.
    • b) It will not cost much.
    • c) Costs are a bit high but fine.
  5. In view ___ the clear need, we are confident that the workshop would succeed.
    • a) to
    • b) on
    • c) of
  6. ___ the volunteers, running costs would remain modest.
    • a) Thanks to
    • b) Owing
    • c) Despite
  7. Which closing is most suitable?
    • a) We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan in more detail.
    • b) Write back quickly!
    • c) Let us know yes or no.

제안서 표현 완성하기

각 문장을 완성하도록 단어 하나를 입력하세요.

  1. At ___, residents who wish to repair items have nowhere affordable to work.
  2. A recent meeting ___ that many people discard items that could be repaired.
  3. The scheme would ___ residents to learn practical skills.
  4. Initial costs are ___ at £8,500.
  5. It is ___ that attendance will remain steady, given the success of similar schemes.
  6. We would be ___ if the Council could grant use of the building.
  7. We would ___ the opportunity to discuss the plan.

쓰기 과제

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220–280단어

내 글 확인

  • 제목을 사용하고 격식 있고 긍정적인 어조로 썼습니다.
  • 필요성을 명확하게 설명했습니다.
  • 구체적인 실행 내용(무엇을, 언제, 누가)을 서술했습니다.
  • 과장 없이 현실적인 기대 효과를 개괄했습니다.
  • 비용과 재원 문제를 다루었습니다.
  • 계획을 논의하자는 정중한 권유로 마무리했습니다.

정답

가장 알맞은 것 고르기

  1. a) This proposal outlines a plan to convert the depot into a workshop.목적을 격식 있고 중립적인 방식으로 밝히고 있습니다.
  2. b) The scheme might help to reduce waste and bring a building back into use.Might help to reduce는 현실적이고 설득력이 있습니다. 나머지 문장은 과장되어 있습니다.
  3. a) to equipPropose 뒤에는 to + 동사원형(또는 to 없이 -ing형)이 옵니다. to equipping과 원형 equip은 올바르지 않습니다.
  4. a) Costs are estimated at £8,500 for tools and roof repairs.구체적이면서 단정을 피한 수치(estimated at)가 막연한 주장보다 더 설득력이 있습니다.
  5. c) ofIn view of는 “~을 고려하여”라는 뜻의 고정 표현입니다.
  6. a) Thanks toThanks to는 긍정적인 원인을 이끕니다. Owing은 to가 필요하고, Despite는 논리를 뒤집습니다.
  7. a) We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan in more detail.정중하고 격식 있으며 추가 논의를 청하는 표현입니다.

제안서 표현 완성하기

  1. presentAt present는 “현재”라는 뜻입니다.
  2. revealed / showed / indicated / suggested / established / highlighted / confirmed / demonstratedRevealed, showed, indicated 및 비슷한 동사들은 증거가 밝혀낸 것을 보고합니다.
  3. enable / allow / help / encourage / permit / empower / inspireEnable, allow, help, encourage 뒤에는 목적어 + to부정사가 옵니다.
  4. estimated / put / calculated / projected / budgeted / assessedCosts are estimated (또는 put, calculated) at ...은 대략적인 수치를 제시하는 표준 표현입니다.
  5. anticipated / expected / likely / hoped / predicted / believed / thought / assumed / probable / envisagedAnticipated와 expected는 둘 다 “일어날 가능성이 높다고 여겨지는”이라는 뜻입니다.
  6. grateful / obliged / thankful / delighted / pleased / appreciative / happyWe would be grateful if ...는 대표적인 정중하고 격식 있는 요청 표현이며, obliged, delighted, pleased도 쓸 수 있습니다.
  7. welcome / appreciate / like / value / loveWe would welcome the opportunity to ...는 격식 있고 긍정적인 맺음말입니다.

모범 답안

Proposal: a reading garden for Eastfield Library

To: The Library Manager

Introduction. This proposal outlines a plan to convert the unused courtyard behind the library into a quiet outdoor reading garden. It describes the need, the proposed work and the likely costs.

The need. At present, the reading rooms are busy and noisy after school, and several regular users have asked for somewhere calmer to study. Meanwhile, the courtyard has been locked for years and is used only for storing old shelving.

What we propose. We propose to clear the courtyard, plant shrubs and herbs, and install six benches and a covered area for wet weather. Volunteers from the local gardening society have offered to help with planting and maintenance, and the work could be completed during the spring so that the garden opens in early summer.

Benefits. The garden would give users a peaceful place to read and would make better use of existing space. It might also attract families who do not currently visit the library, and it would give the community a visible sign that the building is being looked after.

Costs. The work is estimated at £3,200, of which about £1,000 could be raised through a small plant sale and sponsorship from local businesses. We would ask the library to contribute the remaining sum from its maintenance budget.

Conclusion. In view of the clear demand and the modest cost, we are confident that the garden would be a valuable addition. We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan with you.

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