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Tulis proposal yang persuasif yang mengidentifikasi kebutuhan, menguraikan rencana yang realistis, dan membenarkan biaya serta manfaatnya.

Proposal: a shared workshop in the old Marsh Lane depot

To: Greenfield Neighbourhood Council

Introduction. This proposal outlines a plan to convert the disused Marsh Lane depot into a shared workshop where residents can repair, build and learn practical skills. It sets out the need for the project, the activities proposed and the resources required.

The need. At present, residents who wish to mend furniture, bicycles or electrical appliances have nowhere affordable to work. A recent community meeting revealed that many people discard items that could easily be repaired, simply because they lack the tools or the know-how. At the same time, the depot, which has stood empty for six years, is deteriorating and attracting complaints.

What we propose. We propose to equip one hall with workbenches and basic tools, and to open it three evenings a week. Experienced volunteers, many of them retired tradespeople, would run drop-in repair sessions and short courses for beginners. Local schools could also use the space for practical projects during the day.

Benefits. The workshop would reduce waste, bring a neglected building back into use and give residents, particularly older people, a purpose and a place to meet. Furthermore, skills learned there might help some participants find work. Similar schemes elsewhere have attracted steady attendance, which suggests that the demand is real.

Costs and funding. Initial costs are estimated at £8,500 for tools, safety equipment and repairs to the roof. Running costs would be modest, as volunteers would staff the sessions and small charges for materials would cover consumables. We would be grateful if the Council would consider granting use of the building at a nominal rent.

Conclusion. In view of the clear need and the low running costs, we are confident that the workshop would become a valuable community resource. We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan in more detail.

Pilih opsi terbaik

Pilih opsi yang paling efektif dalam proposal formal.

Which sentence best introduces the purpose of a proposal?
- a) This proposal outlines a plan to convert the depot into a workshop.
- b) Hi, I have a great idea about the depot.
- c) You must read this about the depot.
Which sentence presents a benefit with suitable caution?
- a) The scheme will end all waste in the district.
- b) The scheme might help to reduce waste and bring a building back into use.
- c) The scheme is the best possible solution.
We propose ___ the hall with basic tools.
- a) to equip
- b) to equipping
- c) equip
Which sentence is the clearest way to give a cost?
- a) Costs are estimated at £8,500 for tools and roof repairs.
- b) It will not cost much.
- c) Costs are a bit high but fine.
In view ___ the clear need, we are confident that the workshop would succeed.
- a) to
- b) on
- c) of
___ the volunteers, running costs would remain modest.
- a) Thanks to
- b) Owing
- c) Despite
Which closing is most suitable?
- a) We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan in more detail.
- b) Write back quickly!
- c) Let us know yes or no.

Lengkapi bahasa proposal

Ketik satu kata untuk melengkapi setiap kalimat.

At ___, residents who wish to repair items have nowhere affordable to work.
A recent meeting ___ that many people discard items that could be repaired.
The scheme would ___ residents to learn practical skills.
Initial costs are ___ at £8,500.
It is ___ that attendance will remain steady, given the success of similar schemes.
We would be ___ if the Council could grant use of the building.
We would ___ the opportunity to discuss the plan.

Tugas menulis

Perpustakaan kotamu memiliki halaman dalam kecil yang tidak terpakai. Tulis proposal kepada manajer perpustakaan yang mengusulkan agar halaman itu diubah menjadi taman baca terbuka yang tenang. Jelaskan kebutuhannya, uraikan rencanamu, paparkan manfaatnya, dan sebutkan bagaimana proyek itu bisa dibiayai.

220–280 kata

Periksa tulisanmu

Saya menggunakan judul dan nada yang formal dan positif.
Saya menjelaskan kebutuhannya dengan jelas.
Saya menguraikan tindakan yang spesifik (apa, kapan, siapa).
Saya memaparkan manfaat yang realistis tanpa melebih-lebihkan.
Saya membahas biaya dan pendanaan.
Saya menutup dengan undangan yang sopan untuk membahas rencana itu.

Kunci jawaban

Pilih opsi terbaik

a) This proposal outlines a plan to convert the depot into a workshop.Kalimat ini menyatakan tujuan dengan cara yang formal dan netral.
b) The scheme might help to reduce waste and bring a building back into use.Might help to reduce realistis dan persuasif. Kalimat lainnya melebih-lebihkan.
a) to equipPropose diikuti to + infinitif (atau bentuk -ing tanpa to); to equipping dan bentuk dasar equip tidak benar.
a) Costs are estimated at £8,500 for tools and roof repairs.Angka yang spesifik dan berhati-hati (estimated at) lebih meyakinkan daripada klaim yang kabur.
c) ofIn view of adalah frasa tetap yang berarti "mengingat".
a) Thanks toThanks to memperkenalkan sebab yang bersifat positif. Owing membutuhkan to, dan Despite akan membalik logikanya.
a) We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan in more detail.Kalimat ini sopan, formal, dan mengajak untuk berdiskusi lebih lanjut.

Lengkapi bahasa proposal

presentAt present berarti "saat ini".
revealed / showed / indicated / suggested / established / highlighted / confirmed / demonstratedRevealed, showed, indicated, dan kata kerja serupa melaporkan apa yang diungkap oleh bukti.
enable / allow / help / encourage / permit / empower / inspireEnable, allow, help, dan encourage diikuti objek + to-infinitif.
estimated / put / calculated / projected / budgeted / assessedCosts are estimated (atau put, calculated) at ... adalah cara standar untuk menyebutkan angka perkiraan.
anticipated / expected / likely / hoped / predicted / believed / thought / assumed / probable / envisagedAnticipated dan expected keduanya berarti "diyakini mungkin terjadi".
grateful / obliged / thankful / delighted / pleased / appreciative / happyWe would be grateful if ... adalah permintaan formal yang sopan dan klasik; obliged, delighted, dan pleased juga bisa dipakai.
welcome / appreciate / like / value / loveWe would welcome the opportunity to ... adalah frasa penutup yang formal dan positif.

Contoh jawaban

Proposal: a reading garden for Eastfield Library

To: The Library Manager

Introduction. This proposal outlines a plan to convert the unused courtyard behind the library into a quiet outdoor reading garden. It describes the need, the proposed work and the likely costs.

The need. At present, the reading rooms are busy and noisy after school, and several regular users have asked for somewhere calmer to study. Meanwhile, the courtyard has been locked for years and is used only for storing old shelving.

What we propose. We propose to clear the courtyard, plant shrubs and herbs, and install six benches and a covered area for wet weather. Volunteers from the local gardening society have offered to help with planting and maintenance, and the work could be completed during the spring so that the garden opens in early summer.

Benefits. The garden would give users a peaceful place to read and would make better use of existing space. It might also attract families who do not currently visit the library, and it would give the community a visible sign that the building is being looked after.

Costs. The work is estimated at £3,200, of which about £1,000 could be raised through a small plant sale and sponsorship from local businesses. We would ask the library to contribute the remaining sum from its maintenance budget.

Conclusion. In view of the clear demand and the modest cost, we are confident that the garden would be a valuable addition. We would welcome the opportunity to discuss the plan with you.