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Objection to application HB/2291: Millers' Green

14 Linden Row, Harrowby. To: The Planning Officer, Harrowby Borough Council.

Dear Sir or Madam,

Re: Application HB/2291, proposed conversion of Millers' Green into a surface car park

I am writing to register my objection to the above application. I have lived within two hundred metres of the Green for nineteen years, and I write both as a resident and as secretary of the Linden Row Residents' Association.

I appreciate that the town centre has long suffered from congestion, and I do not dispute that additional parking would ease it to some degree. It is, however, difficult to reconcile the applicant's claim that the scheme would enhance the amenity of the area with the loss of the only open space within walking distance of two schools and a care home.

My principal concerns are as follows. First, the transport assessment submitted with the application rests on traffic counts taken during the school holidays and therefore seriously understates likely volumes at peak times. Second, the proposed access road would cross a footpath used daily by several hundred children, a risk that the assessment mentions only in passing. Finally, the loss of eleven mature trees, three of which are protected, is dismissed in a single sentence, with no commitment to replacement planting.

I would respectfully suggest that the Committee defer its decision until the applicant has submitted traffic data gathered during term time and a fuller account of the measures proposed to protect pedestrians. Should the Committee be minded to approve the scheme, I trust that a condition requiring the retention of the protected trees would be attached.

I should be grateful if you would confirm receipt of this letter and inform me of the date on which the application is to be considered, as I wish to address the Committee in person.

Yours faithfully, Nuria Castellanos, Secretary, Linden Row Residents' Association

Scegli l'opzione formale migliore

Scegli l'opzione più adatta per una lettera formale di opposizione.

  1. Which sentence best states the purpose of the letter?
    • a) I just wanted to say I am not happy about the plan.
    • b) Stop this plan right now.
    • c) I am writing to register my objection to the above application.
  2. Which sentence acknowledges the other side before objecting?
    • a) I do not dispute that additional parking would ease congestion; it is, however, difficult to justify the loss of the Green.
    • b) Parking is of no concern to me and never was.
    • c) Everyone knows that parking is a poor excuse for destroying parks.
    • d) Congestion is not a problem at all.
  3. The assessment mentions the risk to children only ___.
    • a) by passing
    • b) at passing
    • c) on passing
    • d) in passing
  4. It is difficult to ___ the applicant's claim with the loss of the only open space.
    • a) settle
    • b) reconcile
    • c) compromise
    • d) adjust
  5. Which expression is closest in meaning to "Should the Committee be minded to approve the scheme"?
    • a) Because the Committee must approve the scheme
    • b) Unless the Committee approves the scheme
    • c) If the Committee were inclined to approve the scheme
    • d) Although the Committee has approved the scheme
  6. Which request is both firm and appropriately tentative?
    • a) I demand that the Committee reject the application.
    • b) I would respectfully suggest that the Committee defer its decision.
    • c) The Committee must defer its decision.
  7. Which sentence is best for the final paragraph?
    • a) Get back to me when you can, OK?
    • b) I should be grateful if you would confirm receipt of this letter.
    • c) Please do not ignore this letter like the last one.

Completa le espressioni formali

Scrivi una parola, oppure la forma indicata tra parentesi, per completare ogni frase.

  1. I am writing to ___ my objection to the above application.
  2. I do not ___ that additional parking would ease congestion.
  3. The transport assessment rests ___ traffic counts taken during the school holidays.
  4. The counts seriously ___ likely volumes at peak times. (understate)
  5. I trust that a condition ___ the retention of the protected trees would be attached. (require)
  6. Should the Committee be ___ to approve the scheme, I trust that conditions would be attached.
  7. Dear Sir or Madam, ... Yours ___,

Compito di scrittura

Un ente che gestisce un piccolo museo locale intende sostituire la sala di lettura con un caffè. Usi regolarmente la sala di lettura. Scrivi una lettera formale al presidente dell'ente, il signor Adeyemi, per opporti al progetto. Indica chi sei, concedi un punto ragionevole, fornisci due o tre motivazioni e richiedi un'azione specifica.

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  • Ho usato un saluto corretto e una chiusura formale corrispondente.
  • Ho indicato lo scopo della lettera nel primo paragrafo e spiegato perché ho titolo per esprimermi.
  • Ho concesso un punto ragionevole prima di oppormi.
  • Ho fornito due o tre motivazioni in un ordine chiaro.
  • Ho richiesto un'azione specifica in modo cortese ma fermo.
  • Ho evitato forme contratte, punti esclamativi e linguaggio emotivo.

Soluzioni

Scegli l'opzione formale migliore

  1. c) I am writing to register my objection to the above application.È l'apertura formale standard, diretta ma cortese. Le altre sono informali o brusche.
  2. a) I do not dispute that additional parking would ease congestion; it is, however, difficult to justify the loss of the Green.Concede prima un punto legittimo e poi solleva l'obiezione. Le altre opzioni liquidano o esagerano.
  3. d) in passingIn passing è l'espressione fissa che significa «brevemente» o «senza prestarvi attenzione».
  4. b) reconcileReconcile something with something significa rendere coerenti due cose apparentemente opposte.
  5. c) If the Committee were inclined to approve the schemeShould + soggetto + be minded to è una costruzione ipotetica formale che significa «se il Comitato fosse incline a».
  6. b) I would respectfully suggest that the Committee defer its decision.Would respectfully suggest è cortese ed esprime comunque con chiarezza ciò che chi scrive vuole.
  7. b) I should be grateful if you would confirm receipt of this letter.Formula una richiesta cortese e pratica. Le altre sono informali o accusatorie.

Completa le espressioni formali

  1. register / lodge / voice / express / raise / submit / record / stateQuesti verbi si combinano tutti con objection in una lettera formale; register e lodge sono i più usati.
  2. dispute / deny / doubt / question / contest / challengeDo not dispute significa «accettare come vero»; la frase passa poi a ciò che chi scrive contesta.
  3. on / uponRest on (o upon) significa «essere basato su».
  4. understate / underestimate / understated / underestimatedUnderstate significa presentare qualcosa come più piccolo di quanto sia. Counts è plurale, quindi si usa understate, non understates (funziona anche il passato understated).
  5. requiringLa proposizione participiale requiring ... descrive la condizione.
  6. minded / inclined / disposed / prepared / willingBe minded to, be inclined to, be disposed to e be prepared to significano tutti «essere disposti a fare qualcosa».
  7. faithfullyUna lettera che inizia con Dear Sir or Madam si chiude con Yours faithfully in inglese britannico.

Risposta modello

Dear Mr Adeyemi,

Re: Proposed conversion of the reading room into a café

I am writing to express my concern at the trust's plan to replace the museum's reading room with a café. I have used the room at least twice a week for six years, and I write as a member of the museum and as a volunteer who helps to catalogue the local archive.

I understand that the museum must find new sources of income, and I do not doubt that a café would attract additional visitors. It is, however, hard to see how the scheme can be reconciled with the trust's stated aim of promoting local history, since the reading room is the only place where the public may consult the town records and photograph collection.

My objections are threefold. First, the plans offer no alternative space for the archive, which would be placed in storage and available only by appointment. Second, the room's quiet is essential to those who work there, many of whom are elderly or students who cannot study at home. Finally, the figures quoted in the consultation paper assume that the café will be profitable within a year, but they include no allowance for the cost of refitting a listed building.

I would therefore respectfully ask that the trust postpone its decision until a full financial assessment has been published and the views of regular users have been sought. I would also suggest that the trustees consider placing the café in the former entrance hall, which is currently unused.

I should be grateful if you would acknowledge this letter and let me know when the matter will be discussed, as several readers would wish to attend.

Yours sincerely, Tobias Lindgren