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IELTS 스타일 쓰기: General Training Task 1 편지

이름:날짜:

공식 시험이 아닌, IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 스타일의 독립 연습입니다. 편지를 구성하는 방법과 알맞은 어조를 고르는 방법을 익히고, 150단어 이상의 편지를 써 봅니다.

격식인가 비격식인가?

각 상황에 가장 알맞은 선택지를 고르세요.

  1. You are writing to a company and you do not know the reader's name. Which greeting is correct?
    • a) Hi there,
    • b) Dear friend,
    • c) Dear Sir or Madam,
  2. Which sentence is the best way to begin a formal letter to a community centre?
    • a) Hi! Just a quick note about my course.
    • b) I am writing about the cooking course that I attended last month.
    • c) I'm writing coz I want to tell you some stuff.
  3. Which sentence describes a problem politely in a formal letter?
    • a) The room was freezing and it was a total disaster!
    • b) The room was really, really cold, you know.
    • c) Unfortunately, the room was often too cold to work in comfortably.
  4. Your letter begins with Dear Sir or Madam. How should it end?
    • a) Yours sincerely,
    • b) Yours faithfully,
    • c) Lots of love,
  5. Your letter begins with Dear Ms Novak. How should it end?
    • a) Yours sincerely,
    • b) Cheers,
    • c) Yours faithfully,
  6. Which is the most suitable way to make a suggestion in a formal letter?
    • a) Start the classes later, OK?
    • b) Would it be possible to start the classes half an hour later?
    • c) You should totally start the classes later.
  7. Which sentence is suitable for an informal letter to a friend?
    • a) Thanks so much for having me last weekend!
    • b) I am writing to express my gratitude for your hospitality.
    • c) I wish to inform you that I enjoyed my stay.
  8. Which closing sentence is best for a formal letter?
    • a) Write back soon, OK?
    • b) Bye for now!
    • c) I look forward to your reply.

편지에 쓰는 고정 표현

빠진 단어를 입력하세요. 괄호 안에 힌트가 있으면 활용하세요.

  1. I look forward to ___ from you.
  2. I would be ___ if you could send me more information about the course.
  3. I am writing ___ your advertisement for part-time staff.
  4. Thank you for ___ (consider) my suggestion.
  5. The teacher was excellent. ___, there was one problem with the room. (contrast)
  6. I am sorry ___ the delay in replying to your letter.
  7. Please ___ me know which dates suit you.
  8. I would like to ___ that the centre should also offer a weekend course. (make a suggestion)

편지 구성하기

Task 1 편지를 계획하고 구성하는 방법에 대해 가장 알맞은 답을 고르세요.

  1. What is the minimum length for a General Training Task 1 letter?
    • a) 100 words
    • b) 250 words
    • c) 150 words
    • d) there is no minimum
  2. Where should you say why you are writing?
    • a) in the first paragraph
    • b) in the last paragraph
    • c) after your name
    • d) you do not need to say it
  3. The task has three bullet points. What is the best plan for the main part of the letter?
    • a) one long paragraph for all three points
    • b) one paragraph for each bullet point
    • c) write only about the easiest point
    • d) a numbered list of the three points
  4. You are writing to a community centre manager about a course. Which sentence best starts the paragraph about a problem?
    • a) I look forward to hearing from you.
    • b) I am writing about the course I attended.
    • c) Yours faithfully, Lina Haddad
    • d) However, there was one problem that affected the whole group.
  5. What should you do about addresses in a Task 1 letter?
    • a) Do not write any addresses.
    • b) Write your address at the top.
    • c) Write both addresses at the top.
    • d) Write the reader's address at the end.
  6. Which sentence belongs in the final paragraph of a formal letter?
    • a) The heating in Room 4 was often broken.
    • b) Thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
    • c) I am writing to tell you about my course.
    • d) Dear Sir or Madam,

쓰기 과제

최근 지역 커뮤니티 센터에서 저녁 강좌를 들었습니다. 센터의 매니저에게 편지를 쓰세요. 편지에 다음 내용을 포함하세요. 어떤 강좌를 들었고 무엇이 마음에 들었는지 말하세요. 강좌 중에 겪은 문제를 설명하세요. 센터가 이 문제를 어떻게 해결할 수 있을지 제안하세요. 150단어 이상 쓰세요. 주소는 쓰지 않아도 됩니다. 편지는 다음으로 시작하세요: Dear Sir or Madam,

150–200단어

내 글 확인

  • 세 가지 요점을 모두 다루었고, 각각 한 문단씩 썼습니다.
  • 첫 문장에서 편지를 쓰는 이유를 분명히 밝혔습니다.
  • 축약형이나 속어 없이 격식 있는 어조를 사용했습니다.
  • Dear Sir or Madam으로 시작하고 Yours faithfully와 내 전체 이름으로 끝맺었습니다.
  • However, Overall, therefore 같은 단어로 아이디어를 연결했습니다.
  • 다양한 어휘를 사용했고 문법과 철자를 확인했습니다.
  • 150단어 이상 썼습니다.

정답

격식인가 비격식인가?

  1. c) Dear Sir or Madam,Dear Sir or Madam은 상대방의 이름을 모를 때 쓰는 격식 있는 표준 인사말입니다.
  2. b) I am writing about the cooking course that I attended last month.정중하고 격식 있으며, 편지를 쓰는 이유를 분명하게 밝힙니다.
  3. c) Unfortunately, the room was often too cold to work in comfortably.Unfortunately는 문제를 정중하게 꺼내는 표현이며, 이 문장은 감정적이거나 수다스러운 표현을 피하고 있습니다.
  4. b) Yours faithfully,영국 영어에서 Dear Sir or Madam은 Yours faithfully와 함께 씁니다.
  5. a) Yours sincerely,인사말에 상대방의 이름을 사용했다면 Yours sincerely로 끝맺습니다.
  6. b) Would it be possible to start the classes half an hour later?Would it be possible to ...?는 격식 있는 편지에서 제안을 할 때 쓰는 정중하고 간접적인 표현입니다.
  7. a) Thanks so much for having me last weekend!친근하고 자연스러운 문장입니다. 나머지 두 문장은 친구에게 쓰기에는 지나치게 격식적입니다.
  8. c) I look forward to your reply.I look forward to your reply는 정중하고 격식 있는 맺음 문장입니다. 나머지 두 문장은 비격식적입니다.

편지에 쓰는 고정 표현

  1. hearing고정 표현은 look forward to + -ing입니다: I look forward to hearing from you.
  2. grateful / very grateful / most grateful / extremely gratefulI would be grateful if you could ...는 무언가를 요청할 때 쓰는 정중하고 격식 있는 표현입니다.
  3. regarding / about / concerning / in response to / with regard to / in reply to / with reference to / in connection with / in relation toRegarding, about, concerning은 모두 편지의 주제를 소개합니다. In response to와 with reference to도 격식 있는 편지에서 흔히 쓰입니다.
  4. considering전치사 for 뒤에는 -ing 형태를 씁니다: Thank you for considering ...
  5. However / Unfortunately / Nevertheless / Nonetheless / Even so / StillHowever는 앞에 나온 좋은 점과 대조되는 내용을 이끕니다. Nevertheless, Even so, Unfortunately도 여기에 쓸 수 있습니다.
  6. for / aboutsorry for 또는 sorry about 뒤에 대상을 붙여 말합니다: I am sorry for the delay.
  7. letLet me know는 상대방에게 알려 달라고 할 때 쓰는 흔하고 친근한 표현입니다.
  8. suggest / propose / recommendI would like to suggest that ...은 격식을 갖춘 편지에서 제안할 때 쓰는 정중한 표현입니다.

편지 구성하기

  1. c) 150 words150단어 이상 써야 합니다. 이보다 짧은 편지는 좋은 점수를 받기 어렵습니다.
  2. a) in the first paragraph독자는 첫 문단에서 편지의 목적을 이해할 수 있어야 합니다.
  3. b) one paragraph for each bullet point요점마다 한 문단씩 쓰면 독자가 모든 내용을 다뤘다는 것을 쉽게 알 수 있습니다.
  4. d) However, there was one problem that affected the whole group.However는 긍정적인 내용에서 문제로 넘어가는 전환을 나타내며, 이 문장은 문단의 주제를 소개합니다.
  5. a) Do not write any addresses.과제에서 주소를 요구하지 않으므로, 주소를 쓰는 데 시간을 쓰지 마세요.
  6. b) Thank you for taking the time to read my letter.독자에게 감사 인사를 하는 것은 격식 있는 편지를 맺음 인사 직전에 마무리하기에 좋은 방법입니다.

모범 답안

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing about the ten-week photography course that I attended at the community centre this spring, which finished last Tuesday.

Overall, I found the course extremely useful. The teacher, Mr Adebayo, explained everything clearly and was always patient with beginners like me. I particularly enjoyed the practical sessions in the park, where we were able to try out new techniques and receive advice on our own photographs.

However, there was one problem that affected the whole group. Room 4, where the course took place, was very cold in the evenings because the heating was often not working. On several occasions we had to keep our coats on, and two students left early because they felt uncomfortable.

I would therefore like to suggest that the heating in Room 4 is checked before the autumn courses begin. Alternatively, evening classes could be moved to one of the larger rooms on the ground floor, which are usually warmer.

Thank you for considering my suggestion. I look forward to joining another course in the future.

Yours faithfully,

Lina Haddad

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