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الكتابة بأسلوب IELTS: رسالة المهمة 1 في General Training

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تدريب مستقل على أسلوب مهمة الكتابة 1 في IELTS General Training، وليس اختبارًا رسميًا: تعلّم كيف تنظّم الرسالة وتختار النبرة المناسبة وتكتب رسالة من 150 كلمة على الأقل.

رسمي أم غير رسمي؟

اختر الخيار الأفضل لكل موقف.

You are writing to a company and you do not know the reader's name. Which greeting is correct?
- a) Hi there,
- b) Dear friend,
- c) Dear Sir or Madam,
Which sentence is the best way to begin a formal letter to a community centre?
- a) Hi! Just a quick note about my course.
- b) I am writing about the cooking course that I attended last month.
- c) I'm writing coz I want to tell you some stuff.
Which sentence describes a problem politely in a formal letter?
- a) The room was freezing and it was a total disaster!
- b) The room was really, really cold, you know.
- c) Unfortunately, the room was often too cold to work in comfortably.
Your letter begins with Dear Sir or Madam. How should it end?
- a) Yours sincerely,
- b) Yours faithfully,
- c) Lots of love,
Your letter begins with Dear Ms Novak. How should it end?
- a) Yours sincerely,
- b) Cheers,
- c) Yours faithfully,
Which is the most suitable way to make a suggestion in a formal letter?
- a) Start the classes later, OK?
- b) Would it be possible to start the classes half an hour later?
- c) You should totally start the classes later.
Which sentence is suitable for an informal letter to a friend?
- a) Thanks so much for having me last weekend!
- b) I am writing to express my gratitude for your hospitality.
- c) I wish to inform you that I enjoyed my stay.
Which closing sentence is best for a formal letter?
- a) Write back soon, OK?
- b) Bye for now!
- c) I look forward to your reply.

عبارات ثابتة للرسائل

اكتب الكلمة أو الكلمات الناقصة. استخدم التلميح بين القوسين عند وجوده.

I look forward to ___ from you.
I would be ___ if you could send me more information about the course.
I am writing ___ your advertisement for part-time staff.
Thank you for ___ (consider) my suggestion.
The teacher was excellent. ___, there was one problem with the room. (contrast)
I am sorry ___ the delay in replying to your letter.
Please ___ me know which dates suit you.
I would like to ___ that the centre should also offer a weekend course. (make a suggestion)

تنظيم رسالتك

اختر أفضل إجابة عن التخطيط لرسالة المهمة 1 وتنظيمها.

What is the minimum length for a General Training Task 1 letter?
- a) 100 words
- b) 250 words
- c) 150 words
- d) there is no minimum
Where should you say why you are writing?
- a) in the first paragraph
- b) in the last paragraph
- c) after your name
- d) you do not need to say it
The task has three bullet points. What is the best plan for the main part of the letter?
- a) one long paragraph for all three points
- b) one paragraph for each bullet point
- c) write only about the easiest point
- d) a numbered list of the three points
You are writing to a community centre manager about a course. Which sentence best starts the paragraph about a problem?
- a) I look forward to hearing from you.
- b) I am writing about the course I attended.
- c) Yours faithfully, Lina Haddad
- d) However, there was one problem that affected the whole group.
What should you do about addresses in a Task 1 letter?
- a) Do not write any addresses.
- b) Write your address at the top.
- c) Write both addresses at the top.
- d) Write the reader's address at the end.
Which sentence belongs in the final paragraph of a formal letter?
- a) The heating in Room 4 was often broken.
- b) Thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
- c) I am writing to tell you about my course.
- d) Dear Sir or Madam,

مهمة كتابة

حضرت مؤخرًا دورة مسائية في مركزك المجتمعي المحلي. اكتب رسالة إلى مدير المركز. في رسالتك: قل أي دورة حضرت وما الذي أعجبك فيها؛ صف مشكلة واجهتها أثناء الدورة؛ اقترح كيف يمكن للمركز حل هذه المشكلة. اكتب 150 كلمة على الأقل. لا تحتاج إلى كتابة أي عناوين. ابدأ رسالتك بـ: Dear Sir or Madam,

150–200 كلمة

راجع كتابتك

غطيت النقاط الثلاث كلها، بفقرة واحدة لكل نقطة.
جملتي الأولى توضح سبب الكتابة.
استخدمت نبرة رسمية، دون اختصارات أو كلمات عامية.
بدأت بـ Dear Sir or Madam وأنهيت بـ Yours faithfully واسمي الكامل.
ربطت أفكاري بكلمات مثل However وOverall وtherefore.
استخدمت مفردات متنوعة وراجعت قواعدي وتهجئتي.
كتبت 150 كلمة على الأقل.

مفتاح الإجابات

رسمي أم غير رسمي؟

c) Dear Sir or Madam,Dear Sir or Madam هي التحية الرسمية المعتادة عندما لا تعرف اسم الشخص.
b) I am writing about the cooking course that I attended last month.هي مهذبة ورسمية، وتذكر سبب الكتابة بوضوح.
c) Unfortunately, the room was often too cold to work in comfortably.تقدّم Unfortunately المشكلة بأدب، والجملة تتجنب اللغة العاطفية أو الثرثرة.
b) Yours faithfully,في الإنجليزية البريطانية، تأتي Dear Sir or Madam مع Yours faithfully.
a) Yours sincerely,عندما تستخدم اسم الشخص في التحية، اختم بـ Yours sincerely.
b) Would it be possible to start the classes half an hour later?Would it be possible to ...? طريقة مهذبة وغير مباشرة لتقديم اقتراح في رسالة رسمية.
a) Thanks so much for having me last weekend!إنها ودّية وطبيعية. الجملتان الأخريان رسميتان أكثر من اللازم لصديق.
c) I look forward to your reply.I look forward to your reply جملة ختامية مهذبة ورسمية. الجملتان الأخريان غير رسميتين.

عبارات ثابتة للرسائل

hearingالعبارة الثابتة هي look forward to + -ing: I look forward to hearing from you.
grateful / very grateful / most grateful / extremely gratefulI would be grateful if you could ... طريقة رسمية مهذبة لطلب شيء ما.
regarding / about / concerning / in response to / with regard to / in reply to / with reference to / in connection with / in relation toRegarding وabout وconcerning كلها تقدّم موضوع رسالتك. In response to وwith reference to شائعتان أيضًا في الرسائل الرسمية.
consideringبعد حرف الجر for نستخدم صيغة -ing: Thank you for considering ...
However / Unfortunately / Nevertheless / Nonetheless / Even so / StillHowever تقدّم تباينًا مع النقطة الجيدة قبلها. وتصلح هنا أيضًا Nevertheless وEven so وUnfortunately.
for / aboutنقول sorry for أو sorry about شيء ما: I am sorry for the delay.
letLet me know طريقة ودّية شائعة لطلب أن يخبرك أحد بشيء.
suggest / propose / recommendI would like to suggest that ... طريقة مهذبة لتقديم اقتراح في رسالة رسمية.

تنظيم رسالتك

c) 150 wordsيجب أن تكتب 150 كلمة على الأقل. الرسائل الأقصر لا يمكن أن تنال درجة جيدة.
a) in the first paragraphيجب أن يفهم القارئ غرض الرسالة من الفقرة الأولى.
b) one paragraph for each bullet pointفقرة واحدة لكل نقطة تجعل من السهل على القارئ أن يرى أنك غطيت كل شيء.
d) However, there was one problem that affected the whole group.However تشير إلى الانتقال من النقاط الإيجابية إلى مشكلة، والجملة تقدّم موضوع الفقرة.
a) Do not write any addresses.المهمة لا تتطلب كتابة عناوين، فلا تضيّع وقتك في كتابتها.
b) Thank you for taking the time to read my letter.شكر القارئ طريقة جيدة لإنهاء الرسالة الرسمية قبل عبارة الختام.

إجابة نموذجية

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing about the ten-week photography course that I attended at the community centre this spring, which finished last Tuesday.

Overall, I found the course extremely useful. The teacher, Mr Adebayo, explained everything clearly and was always patient with beginners like me. I particularly enjoyed the practical sessions in the park, where we were able to try out new techniques and receive advice on our own photographs.

However, there was one problem that affected the whole group. Room 4, where the course took place, was very cold in the evenings because the heating was often not working. On several occasions we had to keep our coats on, and two students left early because they felt uncomfortable.

I would therefore like to suggest that the heating in Room 4 is checked before the autumn courses begin. Alternatively, evening classes could be moved to one of the larger rooms on the ground floor, which are usually warmer.

Thank you for considering my suggestion. I look forward to joining another course in the future.

Yours faithfully,

Lina Haddad