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Menulis gaya IELTS: esai opini Task 2
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Latihan mandiri bergaya IELTS Writing Task 2, bukan tes resmi: pelajari contoh esai opini, latih kata penghubung dan struktur paragraf, lalu tulis esai minimal 250 kata.
Kata penghubung
Pilih kata atau frasa yang paling tepat untuk menghubungkan gagasan.
- Working from home saves commuting time. ___, it can reduce travel costs.
- ___ online meetings are convenient, they cannot fully replace face-to-face contact.
- Many young people have never learnt to cook. ___, they often buy expensive ready-made meals.
- Some skills are hard to practise online, ___ giving a presentation to a live audience.
- ___ the extra cost, many schools have introduced cooking lessons.
- Admittedly, office space is expensive. ___, a shared workplace has benefits that are hard to measure.
- Some employees prefer the office, ___ others are more productive at home.
- ___, for all the reasons given above, I believe that a combination of both approaches is the best solution.
Struktur paragraf
Pilih jawaban terbaik tentang menyusun esai opini.
- Which sentence is the best thesis statement for an opinion essay about working from home?
- What should the introduction of an opinion essay contain?
- Which is the best topic sentence for a body paragraph?
- Choose the most logical order for these sentences in a body paragraph. (a) For example, a student who budgets carefully can avoid borrowing money at university. (b) Managing money is a skill that benefits people throughout their lives. (c) People who understand budgeting can plan for large expenses and avoid debt.
- What should the conclusion of an opinion essay do?
- Why does the sample essay include a paragraph that begins with Admittedly?
- Where should your opinion appear in an opinion essay?
Tugas menulis
Sebagian orang berpendapat bahwa bekerja dari rumah lebih baik bagi karyawan maupun pemberi kerja daripada bekerja di kantor. Sejauh mana kamu setuju atau tidak setuju? Berikan alasan untuk jawabanmu dan sertakan contoh yang relevan dari pengetahuan atau pengalamanmu sendiri. Tulis minimal 250 kata.
250–320 kata
Periksa tulisanmu
- Saya menjawab pertanyaan, dan pendapat saya jelas di pendahuluan dan kesimpulan.
- Setiap paragraf isi memiliki satu gagasan utama, yang diperkenalkan oleh kalimat topik yang jelas.
- Saya mendukung gagasan saya dengan alasan dan minimal satu contoh.
- Saya memakai kata penghubung dengan tepat, seperti However, Moreover, dan For example, tanpa berlebihan.
- Saya memakai kosakata yang beragam dan menghindari pengulangan kata dari pertanyaan.
- Saya memakai campuran kalimat sederhana dan kompleks serta memeriksa tata bahasa dan ejaan saya.
- Saya menulis minimal 250 kata.
Kunci jawaban
Kata penghubung
- b) FurthermoreKalimat kedua menambahkan keuntungan lain, jadi kita butuh kata penambah: Furthermore.
- c) AlthoughAlthough diikuti klausa (subjek + predikat) dan memperkenalkan pertentangan dalam satu kalimat.
- a) As a resultMembeli makanan siap saji adalah akibat dari tidak bisa memasak.
- d) such asSuch as memperkenalkan contoh langsung setelah frasa benda tanpa memulai kalimat baru.
- a) DespiteDespite diikuti frasa benda (the extra cost). Although dan even though membutuhkan klausa lengkap.
- c) HoweverSetelah mengakui suatu poin dengan Admittedly, However memperkenalkan argumen tandingan penulis.
- b) whereasWhereas menggabungkan dua klausa yang bertentangan dalam satu kalimat.
- d) In conclusionIn conclusion memperkenalkan ringkasan akhir dari pendapat penulis.
Struktur paragraf
- c) I disagree that working from home is better for everyone, because both employees and employers lose important benefits of the office.Pernyataan tesis memberi pendapat yang jelas dan alasan singkat. Opsi lainnya tidak menyatakan posisi penulis.
- a) a paraphrase of the question and your opinionPendahuluan menulis ulang pertanyaan dengan kata-katamu sendiri dan menyatakan posisimu. Detailnya ada di paragraf isi.
- d) The main advantage of home working is that employees save both time and money.Kalimat topik menyatakan gagasan utama paragraf dengan jelas. Yang lain adalah contoh, pernyataan yang kabur, dan kesimpulan.
- c) b, c, aMulai dengan kalimat topik (b), jelaskan (c), lalu dukung dengan contoh (a).
- b) restate your opinion and the main reasonsKesimpulan merangkum posisi dan alasan utamamu. Kesimpulan tidak boleh menambah gagasan baru atau mengubah pandanganmu.
- d) to show that the writer has considered the opposite view and can answer itParagraf konsesi menerima satu poin dari pihak lain lalu menjawabnya, sehingga argumen menjadi lebih kuat.
- b) in the introduction, and it should stay the same throughoutNyatakan posisimu di pendahuluan dan pertahankan konsisten sampai kesimpulan.
Contoh jawaban
Since reliable internet connections became common, many people have started to work from home for at least part of the week. While I accept that home working brings real benefits, I disagree that it is better for everyone. In my view, a combination of home and office work is usually the most effective arrangement.
It is true that working from home has clear advantages for employees. Without a daily journey, workers save time and money and often have more energy for their families and hobbies. Many people also find it easier to concentrate on demanding tasks in a quiet room than in a busy open-plan office. Employers can benefit too, since they may need smaller premises and can recruit talented staff who live far away.
However, these benefits come with significant costs. New employees in particular learn a great deal by watching experienced colleagues and asking quick questions, and this is much harder over video calls. Moreover, people who work alone for long periods can feel isolated, and the boundary between work and home life may disappear, so that some end up working longer hours rather than shorter ones. For employers, creative ideas often emerge from informal conversations, which happen less often when teams rarely meet.
For these reasons, I believe a flexible approach is best. For example, a team might spend two or three days a week in the office for meetings, training and planning, and the rest at home for focused individual work.
In conclusion, although working from home offers convenience and flexibility, I do not agree that it is better in every respect. Combining both settings allows employees and employers to enjoy the advantages of each while limiting the drawbacks.