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Un reportaje sobre la desaparición del silencio

A feature article on the vanishing of quiet

Escribe un reportaje de revista con una apertura que sitúe la escena, una voz citada, lenguaje figurado y una imagen final.

Un reportaje informa, pero también atrapa al lector. A diferencia de un informe, se construye en torno a una persona, un lugar o una escena, y usa la narración, las citas, el lenguaje figurado y el ritmo para mantener la atención mientras desarrolla una idea. El registro es culto pero no rígido, y el autor puede permitirse la ironía, el eufemismo y una voz propia. Un buen reportaje empieza con un momento concreto, se amplía hacia el tema general, reconoce una opinión contraria y termina con una imagen en lugar de un resumen.

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Listening for the last quiet places

At six o'clock on a Tuesday morning, the botanist Imre Valk stands at the edge of a drained reservoir and does nothing at all. For eleven minutes he listens. A distant tractor, a wren, the faint tick of cooling stones: that, he says, is as good as it gets.

Valk has spent the best part of a decade mapping what he calls acoustic refuges, places where no human-made sound intrudes for a quarter of an hour at a stretch. When he began, he expected to find them in the remoter reaches of the country. Instead he found that they were vanishing everywhere, shrinking like ice at the edge of a warming sea. Of the three hundred sites he surveyed, fewer than forty still qualify.

The causes are unglamorous: ring roads, delivery drones, the ceaseless hum of ventilation plants. But Valk is more interested in the consequences, which are subtler than mere irritation. Studies he cites suggest that sustained noise nudges up stress hormones even in people who claim to have grown accustomed to it. Habituation, he argues, is not the same as immunity; we simply stop reporting a cost that we continue to pay.

Not everyone is persuaded. Critics point out that cities have always been noisy, and that the clatter of a nineteenth-century street would make a modern commuter wince. Valk concedes the point with a shrug. "Noise is not new," he says. "What is new is that there is no longer anywhere to retreat to."

That, perhaps, is the heart of the matter. Silence has become a scarce resource and, like most scarce resources, it is beginning to be sold. Hotels advertise rooms free of electronic hum; some retreats charge a small fortune for the privilege of being told to say nothing. It is a curious irony that something once available to anyone with a field and a free afternoon should now come with a price tag.

Valk has little patience for such enterprises. His own modest campaign aims to have a handful of the surviving refuges protected, much as ancient woodland is. Whether it succeeds is hard to say. As the light strengthens over the reservoir, a car door slams somewhere beyond the trees, and his eleven minutes are over. He writes the time in his notebook and, with the air of a man making a modest entry in a ledger, closes it.

Lenguaje útil

Elemento del reportajeTécnicaEjemplo del modelo
OpeningA concrete scene, present tense, a surprising detailStands ... and does nothing at all
VoiceA short quotation that sounds spoken, with a framing verbValk concedes the point with a shrug.
Figurative languageSimile or metaphor, used once and wellshrinking like ice at the edge of a warming sea
Cautious claimsAttribution that avoids overstatingStudies he cites suggest ...
BalanceA sceptical view, acknowledged fairlyNot everyone is persuaded.
EndingAn image or gesture that echoes the openingHe writes the time in his notebook and closes it.

Ejercicio 1 de 2

Tono, imágenes y efecto

Elige la mejor opción.

  1. Which opening is best suited to a magazine feature?

  2. "Shrinking like ice at the edge of a warming sea" is an example of which device?

  3. "Habituation is not the same as immunity." What does the writer imply?

  4. "Valk concedes the point with a shrug." What does the shrug suggest?

  5. Silence has become a _____ resource.

  6. Which ending is most effective for a feature article?

  7. Which phrase attributes a claim most cautiously?

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Ejercicio 2 de 2

Completa las frases

Escribe una palabra, o la forma entre paréntesis, para completar cada oración.

  1. Valk has spent the best part a decade mapping acoustic refuges.

  2. Valk has little patience such enterprises.

  3. Of the three hundred sites he surveyed, fewer forty still qualify.

  4. It is a curious irony that something once available anyone with a free afternoon should now cost money.

  5. Critics point that cities have always been noisy.

  6. He wants a few refuges protected, much ancient woodland is.

  7. The refuges were vanishing everywhere, like ice at the edge of a warming sea. (shrink)

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On the second floor of a building with no lift, above a shop that sells only buttons, Dalia Reyes bends over a torn map of the Aldermoor hills and begins, very gently, to mend it.

Reyes is one of perhaps a dozen people in the country who repair paper maps by hand. She learned the trade from a retired surveyor, who paid her in tea and sharp criticism. Her tools are few: a bone folder, a jar of wheat paste, tissue so thin that it clings to the air. "You are not fixing the map," she says. "You are persuading it to forget it was ever damaged."

The work is slow. A single fold, worn through after decades in a coat pocket, may take an afternoon. Customers are mostly walkers and the families of the recently deceased, who arrive carrying an atlas annotated in a hand that nobody else will recognise. Reyes treats such pencil notes as sacred, working around them as a gardener works around a seedling.

The difficulty, of course, is that nobody needs her any more. A phone can show the same hills, in real time, and with a blue dot to say where you are standing. Reyes does not disagree. "A screen tells you where you are," she admits. "A map tells you where you might go, and who went there before you." It is a fine line, and one that few of her customers could articulate, but they feel it in the hands.

Her business survives, narrowly, thanks to a small number of loyal clients and a waiting list that she suspects is mostly sentimental. She has taken on one apprentice, a nervous student who, for the first month, was not allowed to touch the paste.

By late afternoon the Aldermoor map lies flat and almost whole, a faint seam running across its highest ridge. Reyes holds it to the window, and the light passes through the hills like a thought.

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Lección original de Joy English.

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