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B2IELTS 유형40분

IELTS 스타일 쓰기: Task 2 의견 에세이

IELTS-style writing: Task 2 opinion essay

공식 시험이 아닌, IELTS Writing Task 2 스타일의 독립 연습입니다. 모범 의견 에세이를 살펴보고, 연결어와 문단 구조를 연습한 뒤 250단어 이상의 에세이를 써 봅니다.

IELTS 스타일 Writing Task 2에서는 일반적인 주제에 관한 진술에 대해 약 40분 동안 at least 250 words의 에세이를 씁니다. opinion essay(To what extent do you agree or disagree?)에서는 자신의 견해를 밝히고, 이유와 예시로 뒷받침하며, 서론부터 결론까지 같은 입장을 유지합니다. 쉽게 말해 에세이는 네 가지로 평가됩니다. 질문에 얼마나 충분히 답했는지, 아이디어가 얼마나 명확하게 구성되고 연결되었는지, 어휘의 폭과 정확성, 문법의 폭과 정확성입니다.

예시 문제

일부 사람들은 학교가 학문 과목뿐 아니라 요리, 기본적인 집 수리, 돈 관리 같은 실용적인 기술도 가르쳐야 한다고 믿습니다. 이에 대해 어느 정도 동의하거나 동의하지 않습니까?

모범 글

Sample answer: should schools teach practical life skills?

In many countries, school timetables are dominated by academic subjects such as mathematics, science and languages. Some people argue that schools should also teach practical skills, including cooking, basic repairs and managing money. I strongly agree with this view, provided that these skills complement academic subjects rather than replace them.

The main reason for my opinion is that such skills are essential for independent adult life. Young people who leave home without knowing how to prepare a simple meal often rely on expensive ready-made food, which can harm both their health and their budget. Similarly, someone who has never learnt to plan a monthly budget may easily get into debt. Since not every family has the time or knowledge to teach these things at home, school is the fairest place to ensure that every child learns them.

Furthermore, practical lessons can make academic knowledge more meaningful. Calculating the cost of ingredients for a class meal, for example, turns abstract percentages into something students can see and use. Students who struggle in traditional lessons may also discover that they are skilled with their hands, which can build their confidence in other subjects.

Admittedly, timetables are already full, and critics worry that new subjects would reduce the time available for exam preparation. However, practical skills do not require many hours: a single weekly lesson, or projects combined with existing subjects, would be enough to make a real difference.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that schools should teach practical life skills alongside academic subjects. Doing so would prepare young people for the realities of adult life and help them see the value of what they learn in the classroom.

유용한 표현

기능유용한 표현
Giving your opinionIn my view, ... / I strongly agree that ... / I partly agree that ...
Adding a pointFurthermore, ... / Moreover, ... / In addition, ...
ContrastingHowever, ... / Although ..., ... / While ..., ... / ..., whereas ...
Conceding (accepting the other side)Admittedly, ... / It is true that ..., but ...
Cause and resultAs a result, ... / Therefore, ... / This means that ...
Giving examplesFor example, ... / For instance, ... / ... such as ...
ConcludingIn conclusion, ... / To sum up, ...

연습 1 / 2

연결어

생각을 가장 잘 연결하는 단어나 구를 고르세요.

  1. Working from home saves commuting time. _____, it can reduce travel costs.

  2. _____ online meetings are convenient, they cannot fully replace face-to-face contact.

  3. Many young people have never learnt to cook. _____, they often buy expensive ready-made meals.

  4. Some skills are hard to practise online, _____ giving a presentation to a live audience.

  5. _____ the extra cost, many schools have introduced cooking lessons.

  6. Admittedly, office space is expensive. _____, a shared workplace has benefits that are hard to measure.

  7. Some employees prefer the office, _____ others are more productive at home.

  8. _____, for all the reasons given above, I believe that a combination of both approaches is the best solution.

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연습 2 / 2

문단 구조

의견 에세이를 구성하는 방법에 대해 가장 알맞은 답을 고르세요.

  1. Which sentence is the best thesis statement for an opinion essay about working from home?

  2. What should the introduction of an opinion essay contain?

  3. Which is the best topic sentence for a body paragraph?

  4. Choose the most logical order for these sentences in a body paragraph. (a) For example, a student who budgets carefully can avoid borrowing money at university. (b) Managing money is a skill that benefits people throughout their lives. (c) People who understand budgeting can plan for large expenses and avoid debt.

  5. What should the conclusion of an opinion essay do?

  6. Why does the sample essay include a paragraph that begins with Admittedly?

  7. Where should your opinion appear in an opinion essay?

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쓰기 과제

일부 사람들은 재택근무가 사무실에서 일하는 것보다 직원과 고용주 모두에게 더 낫다고 믿습니다. 이에 대해 어느 정도 동의하거나 동의하지 않습니까? 답에 대한 이유를 제시하고, 자신의 지식이나 경험에서 관련된 예시를 포함하세요. 250단어 이상 쓰세요.

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내 글

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모범 답안

Since reliable internet connections became common, many people have started to work from home for at least part of the week. While I accept that home working brings real benefits, I disagree that it is better for everyone. In my view, a combination of home and office work is usually the most effective arrangement.

It is true that working from home has clear advantages for employees. Without a daily journey, workers save time and money and often have more energy for their families and hobbies. Many people also find it easier to concentrate on demanding tasks in a quiet room than in a busy open-plan office. Employers can benefit too, since they may need smaller premises and can recruit talented staff who live far away.

However, these benefits come with significant costs. New employees in particular learn a great deal by watching experienced colleagues and asking quick questions, and this is much harder over video calls. Moreover, people who work alone for long periods can feel isolated, and the boundary between work and home life may disappear, so that some end up working longer hours rather than shorter ones. For employers, creative ideas often emerge from informal conversations, which happen less often when teams rarely meet.

For these reasons, I believe a flexible approach is best. For example, a team might spend two or three days a week in the office for meetings, training and planning, and the rest at home for focused individual work.

In conclusion, although working from home offers convenience and flexibility, I do not agree that it is better in every respect. Combining both settings allows employees and employers to enjoy the advantages of each while limiting the drawbacks.

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