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C1IELTS 유형30분

IELTS 스타일 쓰기: 교육에 관한 Task 2 에세이

IELTS-style writing: a Task 2 essay on education

IELTS Academic Task 2 스타일의 독립 연습이며 공식 시험이 아닙니다: 모범 에세이를 공부하고, 응집성과 완곡 표현(hedging)을 연습한 다음, 직접 써 봅니다.

Task 2 에세이에서는 일반적인 질문에 대한 입장을 약 250단어 이상으로, 대략 40분 안에 제시하고 뒷받침합니다. 이 수준에서 채점자는 분명한 전반적 입장, 나열이 아닌 발전된 아이디어, 정확하고 다양한 어휘, 유연한 문법, 기계적인 연결어에 의존하지 않는 응집성을 봅니다. 모범 에세이를 읽고 각 단락이 하나의 역할을 맡고 있음을 확인한 다음, 논증을 신중하게 들리게 하는 표현을 연습하십시오.

모범 글

Model essay: schools, creativity and technical knowledge

It is often claimed that, as machines take over routine tasks, schools should concentrate on creativity and social skills rather than technical knowledge. While I accept that these qualities will become more valuable, I do not believe that technical knowledge can safely be sidelined.

The case for the proposal is a strong one. Tasks that follow clear rules, from filling in forms to sorting data, are precisely those that software performs most efficiently, so a curriculum built around them risks preparing young people for jobs that may no longer exist. By contrast, the ability to generate original ideas, to collaborate and to persuade is far harder to automate. Employers also report that graduates with sound technical skills frequently lack the interpersonal abilities needed to work in teams.

Nevertheless, it would be a mistake to treat the two kinds of learning as rivals. Creativity does not arise in a vacuum: a designer, an engineer or a composer can only innovate within a field if he or she has mastered its basic principles. Moreover, a population that understands how technology works is better placed to question it, whether by spotting errors in an automated decision or by deciding when a tool should not be used at all.

In practice, the most sensible approach is probably integration rather than substitution. Technical subjects could be taught through group projects that demand imagination and negotiation, so that pupils develop several capacities at once, instead of acquiring them in separate lessons that compete for time.

In conclusion, I agree only partly with the view expressed. Creativity and social skills deserve a larger place in education, but this should be achieved by teaching technical content differently, not by teaching less of it.

유용한 표현

기능예시
Stating a position with hedgingI would argue that...; To a certain extent, I agree; This seems likely to...
Conceding a pointWhile it is true that...; Admittedly,...; There is some merit in this view, but...
ContrastingBy contrast,...; Nevertheless,...; whereas...; Despite + noun
Adding a stronger pointMoreover,...; What is more,...; Not only... but also...
ConcludingOn balance,...; All things considered,...; In conclusion, I agree only partly...

연습 1 / 2

응집성, 문체, 완곡 표현

에세이의 각 문장을 완성하거나 개선하기에 가장 알맞은 선택지를 고르십시오.

  1. _____ these qualities will become more valuable, technical knowledge cannot safely be ignored.

  2. Choose the most carefully hedged sentence.

  3. Rule-based tasks are easy to automate. _____, creative work is far harder for machines to imitate.

  4. Which sentence is most suitable for a formal essay?

  5. _____ the cost, many schools have introduced coding lessons.

  6. _____, I believe the benefits of the proposal outweigh the drawbacks.

  7. Choose the most carefully worded statement.

  8. Pupils could learn teamwork through group projects. _____ approach would also keep the technical content in the curriculum.

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연습 2 / 2

구 완성하기

에세이에서 가져온 각 구를 완성하는 단어를 하나 입력하십시오.

  1. To a certain , I agree with this view.

  2. It could be that schools place too much emphasis on examinations.

  3. On the one hand, digital tools save time; on the hand, they may weaken some skills.

  4. Some people claim that technology makes us lazy; , the evidence for this is limited.

  5. The argument has some , but I am not fully convinced by it.

  6. All things , the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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직접 해 보기

쓰기 과제

어떤 사람들은 대학 교육이 원하는 모든 사람에게 제공되어야 한다고 믿는 반면, 다른 사람들은 가장 유능한 학생들에게만 자리를 제한해야 한다고 생각합니다. 두 견해를 논하고 여러분 자신의 의견을 제시하십시오. 최소 250단어로 작성하십시오.

0단어

검사는 오픈소스 검사기 Harper로 사용 중인 기기에서 실행되므로 글이 어디에도 전송되지 않습니다. 흔한 실수를 많이 찾아내지만 모두 찾지는 못하며, 내용의 좋고 나쁨은 판단하지 않습니다. Harper 라이선스

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내 글

아직 아무것도 쓰지 않았습니다.

모범 답안

The question of who should be admitted to university is far from straightforward. Some argue that every willing applicant deserves a place, while others believe that places should be reserved for the most able. In my view, both positions contain part of the truth, but a system based on ability alone is more likely to waste potential than to protect standards.

Those who favour open access make a principled argument. Education improves earning power and personal confidence, so restricting it can deepen existing inequalities. Moreover, ability at eighteen is not a fixed quantity: many people who perform modestly at school flourish once they find a subject that interests them. Open access also allows adults who change career later in life to retrain.

On the other hand, there are practical limits. Teaching resources are finite, and large classes may reduce the quality of teaching for everyone. Employers, too, rely on degrees as an indicator of competence, and that signal could lose its value if qualifications were awarded without any selection. It is therefore understandable that some institutions wish to limit entry.

Nevertheless, selection need not be based on a single examination. Universities could consider a wider range of evidence, such as projects, interviews and previous work experience, and could offer foundation courses to students who need extra support. Such measures would protect standards without closing doors prematurely.

In conclusion, I believe that places should be widely available, but that access should be accompanied by support, so that opportunity does not become a promise that cannot be kept.

쓴 글은 이 브라우저에 저장되며, 로그인한 경우 계정에도 저장됩니다. 채점은 하지 않습니다. 검사, 체크리스트, 모범 답안으로 스스로 확인하세요.

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